My eventful journey
It was long ago, when I was a kid. At that time my father was a sailor. We both love oceans and seas. That was usual windy autumn day. We intended to get shrimps. Having had our breakfast, we set off to the ocean. Not wanting to get wet, we get dressed properly. The sky was cloudy and the wind was rising. But I wasn't afraid. In my childhood I never be afraid, when my dad was near. Feeling excited, we sail from the coast farther and farther. We even almost reached Japan. The more time we spent in the dark endless ocean, the harder violent storm broke down. I will never ever forget that ocean. It was everywhere. The waters of the ocean were so sinister. The nature was ramping. Noticing that it started to rain, we made our minds up to catch some shrimps and finish that adventure. My dad gave me the helm and pulled out the nettings.
But only now I realize how much my dad had to bear in his mind and how dangerous it was!
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My eventful journey
It was long ago, when I was a kid. At that time my father was a sailor. We both love oceans and seas. It was a usual windy autumn day. We intended to get shrimp. Having had our breakfast, we set off to the ocean. Not wanting to get wet, we get dressed properly. The sky was cloudy and the wind was rising. But I wasn't afraid. In my childhood I was never afraid when my dad was near. Feeling excited, we sail farther and farther from the coast. We even almost reached Japan. The more time we spent in the dark endless ocean, the harder the violent storm broke down. I will never ever forget that ocean. It was everywhere. The waters of the ocean were so sinister. The nature was ramping (Not sure what you mean by ramping? Not normal English usage). Noticing that it started to rain, we made our minds up to catch some shrimp and finish that adventure. My dad gave me the helm and pulled out the nets.But only now do I realize how much my dad had to bear in his mind, and how dangerous it was!
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My eventful journey
It was long ago, when I was a kid. At that time, my father was a sailor. We both love the ocean and the sea. It was a usual windy autumn day. We intended to catch some shrimps. Having had our breakfast, we set off to the ocean. Not wanting to get wet, we were appropriately0
Thank you! It was the Pacific Ocean, near Japan and the Kurile islands=)
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I love this notebook. Good one. I can imagine it well.
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