Yesterday I have watched a biographical documentary
Yesterday I have watched a biographical documentary about the life of Whitney Houston. It was an interesting documentary and after seen this I was reflecting about how people who conquer fame have to deal with their personal problems. It must be very difficult to take action when a lot of people lays on you to earn money. I think fame and popularity has a price and sometimes it can take your freedom.
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Yesterday I have watched a biographical documentary
Yesterday I have watched a biographical documentary about the life of Whitney Houston. It was an interesting documentary and after seen this saw it, I was reflecting about how people who conquer fame have to deal with their personal problems. It must be very difficult to take action when a lot of people lays rely on you to earn money. I think fame and popularity has a price and sometimes it can take your freedom.Great job! Your thought were very interesting to read. I just made some minor adjustments to your sentences.
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1. The word "have" in this sentence isn't needed. Although "have watched" is used sometimes, its more common to say "watched" instead of "have watched".
2. The word "lays" would not be used in this instance. The word "rely" is a better word choice; you can also used the word "depend". Either rely or depend can be used; the have very similar meanings.
Rely: be dependent on. Example sentence: "The charity has to rely entirely on public donations."
Depend: rely on. Example sentence: "He is a person you could depend on."
I hope this helps! :)
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