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Talking about successful entrepreneur Richard Brandson has an incredible success path. Proof is in the pudding; about his fortune he became the fifth richer man in Britain. Love his adventure especially about the balloon passed across Atlantic and Pacific ocean (made me dreamed). So this book inspired me a lot! The lesson that etched my memory will be about believing in your heart, follow your heart, be 100% in gratitude of what you do and you will naturally attract your life as a movie.

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Talking about a successful entrepreneur

Richard Brandson has an incredible success path. The Proof is in the pudding; about regarding his fortune he became the fifth richer richest (you should use the superlative ending -est there) man in Britain. I Love his adventures especially about the balloon passed across Atlantic and Pacific ocean (see note below) (made me dreamed dream). So this book inspired me a lot! The lesson that was etched my memory will was be about believing in your heart, following your heart, and being 100% in gratitude of what you do and you will naturally attract your life as a movie.(?)

Suggested Edit:. "..especially how he sailed across the Atlantic and Pacific oceans in a balloon."

Je crois que son nom est Branson, sans 'd' :-)

Tu as bien ecrit!  Fais attention au mot 'about' qui est difficile a traduire en francais. Une astuce: commences avec des phrases un peu plus simples et maitres-les.

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