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My Fathter`s masterpiece!!!
Seal carving is the real culture of our Chinesea.Few people know of this culture art form. It needs more publicity. My father perfectly expresses this culture it in on a piece of wood in perfection. He pass transfers the soul of life to us by means of our a Chinese word character1. I really like it. If you like it ,please enjoy it 2. Of course By all means, if you have some advice,please tell me any advice is much appreciated3. I will be very most grateful to you!
1. Technically Chinese do not have words. This is because words are form from letters of the alphabet. Chinese is not alphabet based. Chinese phrases are formed by characters. Character is the technical word used in linguistics.
2. I don't understand what you mean. I always advise those learning English to write in their native tongue as well so that those who can read the native language of the writer, correction is much easier. Sometimes we can guess from the context, sometimes we don't. For example, "transfer" is a better word choice than "passed". If I don't know any Chinese culture, then I would not be able to understand what you are talking about on "seals".
Anyway, you should take some pictures of your father's seal carving and post it to your writings to show the masterpieces to the world. It would be great to appreciate his work by everyone who reads your comments. :)
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