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The most memorable person in my life The most memorable person in my life is a teacher who taught me meditation. That's because he helped me a lot in the hard time in my life. To be specific, I used to suffer from high psychological pressure and meditating help me dealing with them well. So now I'm no longer afraid of them. Moreover, he usually suggested me remember what is the really important thing in my life. It always helps me get through the inanition time instead of just wondering or idling.

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The most memorable person in my life

The most memorable person in my life is a teacher who taught me meditation. That's because he helped me a lot during a hard time in my life. To be specific, I used to suffer from high psychological pressure* and meditating helps me dealing with the stress better. So now I'm no longer afraid of them. Moreover, he usually suggested that I me remember what is the really important thing in my life. It always helps me get through the initiation* time instead of just wondering or idling.


Notes:  Good job, Zekun.  Meditation is wonderful, isn't it?  Your writing is clear and easy to understand.  Wishing you all the best in your language learning!


*  Although "high psychological pressure" is understandable, I probably would use a different term like, "terrible reactions to high stress" or "high anxiety due to life pressures."

* You could also say, "helps me get through the initial stages of high stress".

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