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The Effect of William’s Marriage Cinderella finally married the Prince and lived happily ever after. Every girl hopes to marry a Prince, but will Cinderella’s story come true in real life? On April 29th2011,Prince William married Kate at West minister Abbey. The occasion attracted much attention. An estimated two billion people watched the wedding across the world and 24.5 million watched the event live in the UK. William and Kate were good friends at the beginning. Things changed just because of a fundraising fashion show at St.Andrews. Kate was asked to model a sheer strapless dress. When this charming and sexy girl appeared at the stage, the Prince was immediately attracted. Their fairytale romance began. But their love is not smooth. Under great pressure, they broke up in 2007. The fate ultimately led them back into one another’s arm. In November 2010, after dating for 8 years, they announced their engagement. The royal marriage deeply influences many aspects of society. Many people are not satisfied with constitutional monarchy. They doubt the royalty’s function and even think it isn’t worth spending so much money on royalty. At this time, William’s wedding attracted much more attention from all over the world, compared with other countries’. It shows the UK royalty’s status. Simultaneously, the luxurious wedding creates many commercial opportunies. Some businessmen try their best to undertake some tasks, others produce commodities related to the wedding. The cup with new couple’s photo, the bridal veil and the souvenirs are popular among people. It helps boost the economy during the depression. The great effects make people think their view again. As a result, more people are for royalty’s existence. Marrying a common woman makes public feel closer to William. They hope he can succeed to the throne bypass his father Charles. It seems a little difficult under the current succession law. What’s more, Kate was verified to be sterile. Beauty or country, let’s leave this question to William. This century wedding makes people recall Diana. Compared with Diana, Kate is tougher and more confident. Can she perform well in the future? Will their happiness last forever? Time tries all things, we just wish them good luck.
15 cze 2011 09:01
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15 czerwca 2011
excellent,
15 czerwca 2011
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