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Recently, I watched a movie called Wonder. In this movie there was a little boy called Auggie whose face was destroyed by nature when he was burned (It's supposed to be "was + past tense verb."). At first, (add a comma after "at first" as this is an adverb) he study studied at home. Later on (I think it's better to say "later on" rather than "later" when using it as an adverb), his mother send sent him to school, because he should accept normal education as like the other children (Use the word "like" instead when comparing similarities). Because of (It's better to say "because OF" rather than "because.") his terrible looks, no one like to be friends with him. But his families family (every person has only one family) is very kind. With the (add a determiner [a, an, the, that, etc.] before a noun) help of teachers and classmates, finally he overcome the challenges and have had a good time in school. It is obvious in this movie that every one have a hard time in their life. We are not the only one who feel pain in life.

Hope this helps~! I noticed that most of the errors were on verb tenses. Maybe you can practice more of writing verbs in past tense soon. If you have any questions, feel free to ask.

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Recently, I watched a movie called Wonder. In this movie, (add comma) there was is a little boy called  named Auggie, (add comma) whose face was destroyed by nature when he was burn burnt. At first, he study studied at home. Later, his mother send sent him to school, because she believed that he should accept normal education  the same education as other children. Because his terrible look (or appearance), no one like  wanted to be friends with him. But his families is family was very kind. With help of teachers and classmates, (add comma)  finally he overcome he finally overcame the challenges and have had a good time in school. It is obvious in this movie that every one have has a hard time in their his or her life. We are not the only one ones (plural) who feel pain in life. (suggestion:  In this movie, I learned that everyone goes through his or her own difficulties in life. None of us is alone in feeling its pains.) 

Recently, I watched a movie called Wonder. In this movie there was a little boy called named Auggie whose face was destroyed by nature when he was burn burned. At first he study studied at home. Later, his mother send sent him to school, because he should accept receive normal education as like other children. Because of his terrible look, no one like liked to be friends with him. But his families family is was very kind. With help of teachers and classmates he finally he overcome overcame the challenges and have had a good time in school. It is obvious in this movie that every one have a has hard times in their life. We are not the only ones who feel pain in life.

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Recently, I watched a movie called Wonder. In this movie there was a little boy called Auggie whose face [was destroyed by nature]/was/had been disfigured when he was burned. At first he studied at home. Later, his mother sent him to school, because he should [accept]/receive/follow a normal education as/like other children. Because of his terrible [look]/appearance, no one [like]/wanted to be friends with him. But his familyies is very understanding/supportive/[kind]. With the help of his teachers and classmates he finally [he] overcomes the challenges and have has a good time in school.  It is obvious in this movie that everyone may have a hard time in their life. We are not the only ones who/to feel pain in life.