Amelia Earhart an American flying pioneer
I was so interested by Amelia's story of life.
She was nurse's aid in Toronto Hospital at 1918 treated soldiers who had fought in world war 1, as long as she worked there, she also spent her free time in the airfield. Amelia was marveled by the shape and power of plane and she hoped could fly in a plane. She was so eager to attain her achievement. Amelia spent her salary for paying her flying lesson, every night she read a book, she was determined that she had to fly. Only for several months she could fly and attained some feats, such as, she bought an airplane for herself, she was choosen as a crew in important flight who the only one a woman, then she drived an airplane across
the Atlantic ocean but it wasn't a smooth ride, she got a horrible storm and gasoline leaked from a fuel tank but she could pass it.Amelia broke a world record as the first woman who flown faster across Atlantic ocean.
i recomended this book that you have to read it. She was an attractive, determined and excited woman, never give up to attain her achievement.
She deserve became an American flying pioneer.
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Amelia Earhart, an American flying pioneer
I was so interested by Amelia's life story.She was a nurse's aid in Toronto Hospital in 1918, treating soldiers who had fought in World War 1. While working there she spent her free time in the airfield. Amelia was marveled by the shape and power of the plane and she hoped she could fly in one. She was very eager to attain her achievement. Amelia spent her salary paying for flying lessons, and every night reading an aeronautics book she was determined that she had to fly. Only after several months could she fly and she attained some feats such as looping the loop. She bought an airplane for herself, and she was chosen as crew in an important flight where she was the only woman. Then she flew an airplane across
the Atlantic Ocean* but it wasn't a smooth ride, she hit a horrible storm and gasoline leaked from a fuel tank but she survived. Amelia broke the world record as the first woman who flew fastest across the Atlantic Ocean.
I recomended this book and you have to read it. She was an attractive, determined and exciting woman, who never gave up on her dream.
She deserved to become an American flying pioneer.
*Ocean or ocean, Earth or earth, Sun or sun, Moon or ... ? Modern writing prefers moon etc, older writing prefers Moon etc. I think both are valid.
very well written!
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Amelia Earhart an American flying pioneer
I was so interested by Amelia's story of life.She was a nurse's aid in Toronto Hospital in 1918 and treated soldiers who had fought in world war 1, as long as she worked there, she also spent her free time in the airfield. Amelia was marveled by the shape and power of planes and she hoped that she could fly in a plane. She was so eager to attain her goal. Amelia spent her salary in paying for her flying lessons, every night she read a book, she was determined that she had to fly. Only for several months she could fly and she attained some feats, such as, she bought an airplane for herself, she was choosen as a crew member in an important flight where she was the only one a woman, then she drove an airplane across the Atlantic ocean but it wasn't a smooth ride, she got a horrible storm and gasoline leaked from the fuel tank but she kept going.Amelia broke a world record as the first woman who flewn faster across the Atlantic ocean.
I recommend this book - you have to read it. She was an attractive, determined and excited woman, never giving up on attaining her goal.
She deserved becoming an American flying pioneer.
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