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Making a new cake recipe! I work in the cake shop and I’m making a new cake recipe for couple days. I have to taste it and improve it again and again. How much I would gain my weight when I’ve done a new recipe. Haha…

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Making a new cake recipe!

I work in the a cake shop and I’m busy for the next two days making a new cake recipe for couple days.
I have to taste it in order to improve it.and improve it again and again.
I wonder how much weight I will gain from taste testing this new recipe. . Haha…

Good job! I bet which ever cake you make it will taste good :) 

Good luck :D


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Making a new cake recipe!

I work in the cake shop and I’m making a new cake recipe for couple days.
I have to taste it and improve it again and again.
How much I would gain my weight when I’ve done a new recipe. Haha…


The first 2 sentences are not bad. The third sentence needs some adjustment. I hope this helps!

I work in a cake shop, and I will be working on a new cake recipe for a couple of days.

When I try a new recipe, I have to taste it so I can make improvements.

I wonder how much weight I will gain while working on this new recipe! Haha:)

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Creating new recipes is going to make me gain so much weight!


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