Today's news
Today was very hot,I sweated. I was day off,so I went to see a movie of Pirates of the Caribbean. It was funny and excited. I recommend it.
今天很热。我出了汗。我休息。我去看电影的加勒比海盗。这个开心和兴奋了。
我推荐。
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Thank you for reading my diary in every time. I can not write long yet.But I want to be able to write long . so I keep study hard. Please teach me
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Today's news
It Today was very hot today,that's why I was sweated. It was day off, so I went to see a movie of "Pirates of the Caribbean". It was funny and exciteding.(I was excited) I recommend it.
今天很热。我出了汗。我休息。我去看电影的加勒比海盗。这个开心和兴奋了。
我推荐。
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Corrected from reading your Chinese into the way an English speaker would write.
I am sweating because of today's heat. I needed the rest and so I went to see the "Pirates of the Caribbean". Made me happy and elated. I recommend it.
Today's news
Today was very hot,I sweated. I was day off,so I went to see a movie of Pirates of the Caribbean. It was funny and excited. I recommend it.
今天很热。我出了汗。我休息。我去看电影的加勒比海盗。这个开心和兴奋了。
我推荐。
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Today's news
Today was very hot, so I sweated. I was had a day off,so I went to see a movie of called Pirates of the Caribbean. It was funny and excitedexciting. I recommend it.
今天很热。我出了汗。我休息。我去看电影的加勒比海盗。这个开心和兴奋了。
我推荐。
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ok,i will see it.
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