Ronald
Ronald H. guides us throughout his touching World War II experience as a loyal employee of the British railway industry, belatedly recognize as a strategic player in the Allied victory.
Right after the war out breaking, day and night rail transport in the UK falls on times of tempest and trouble. Rail transport engines are mobilized in the war effort by the state, so that highly skilled labor forces. Needs of transportation will never stop to increase: troops, workers, children, Officials, resources, goods …and organization must be rigorously adjusted daily. Everyday life is getting harder and harder for railway workers (increasing work time, air raids, gas attacks, lower living standards) despites a few extra unexpected advantages and the alternative American soldiers approach and their material help.
Yet civilian like workers get used to the “war routine” as time advanced and display phlegmatic remarkable courage and devotion. In 1945, they all go on like nothing happened, and Ronald and his peers return to pamper their locos.
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Ronald
Ronald H. guides us throughout his touching World War II experience as a loyal employee of the British railway industry, belatedly recognized as a strategic player in the Allied victory.Right after the war out breaking out, [or after the outbreak of the war] day and night rail transport in the UK falls on times of tempest and trouble. Rail transport engines are mobilized in the war effort by the state, so that highly skilled labor forces. [On a besoin d'une conclusion. 'So that' est comme 'afin que' ou 'pour' alors on doit utiliser une phrase complète avec un verb.] The needs of transportation will never stop increasing: troops, workers, children, Officials, resources, goods …and organization must be rigorously adjusted daily. Everyday life is getting harder and harder for railway workers (increasing work time, air raids, gas attacks, lower living standards) despites a few extra unexpected advantages and the alternative American soldiers' approach and their material help.
Yet civilian-like workers get used to the “war routine” as time advanced and display phlegmatic and remarkable courage and devotion. [You have 'get used to' and 'display' in present tense, but 'advanced' in past tense. So you should probably switched 'advanced' to present tense to stay consistent.] In 1945, they all go on like nothing happened, and Ronald and his peers return to pamper their locomotives.
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