Mimi's diary
It was too hot yesterday! Though summer just has come, I can't wait for Autumn.
I went to English school. Studying English is so fun! My teacher is a American, she is very Enthusiasm. And my classmates are humorous. I'm look forward to going school every weekend.
Besides English, I'm studying Chinese. There're many English class neaby but there isn't Chinese class. So I've studied Chinese by myself for long time. I've thinking that I want a Chinese teacher, but I fond this "italki" on the internet finally!
You're my teachers, classmates, and friends! I'm happy to meet all of you!
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Mimi's diary
It was too hot yesterday! Though summer Summer just has come, I can't wait for Autumn.I went to the English school; studying English is so much fun! My teacher is an American, she is very Enthusiasm enthusiastic. And In addition, my classmates are humorous. I'm looking forward to going to school every weekend.
Besides English, I'm studying Chinese. There're There are many English classes nearby but there aren't any Chinese class, therefore I've studied Chinese by myself for long time. I've been thinking that I want to be a Chinese teacher, but I found this "italki" on the internet finally! <-- Note 1.
You're all my teachers, classmates, and friends! I'm happy to meet all of you!
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Well done Mimi, well written and totally understandable.
Note 1 - I've been thinking that I want a Chinese teacher, but I found this "italki" on the internet finally!
You have two ideas here (1) I've been thinking that I want a Chinese teacher and (2) but I found this "italki" on the internet finally!
I understand the connection between the two phases. You have used a conjunction "but", implying that you thing you want a Chinese teacher but now, you don't need to find a teacher because you found italki.
You could rewrite this as follows, "I've been thing that I want to find a Chinese teacher, but since I finally found "italki" on the internet, that wont't be necessary.
I hope this helps.
Cheers.
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