Thinking I used to think , helping people is a part of my life. But as the time goes, my mind changed. It doesn't help me get more friends. I don't know why they leave me. I think I did not do anyth

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Thinking I used to think , helping people is a part of my life. But as the time goes, my mind changed. It doesn't help me get more friends. I don't know why they leave me. I think I did not do anything wrong. Or, here is the problem. Am I annoying? I just want to know.

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I used to think, helping people is a part of my life.
But as time goes by, my mind is changing //or as time went by, my mind changed ///
It doesn't help me get more friends.
I don't know why they leave me.
I think I did not do anything wrong.
Or, here is the problem:
Am I annoying?
I just want to know.

These corrections are trying to keep a consistent tense, a sense of time, in line 2. The punctuation poitns are very minor.

It would be a shame to give up helping people, whether it brings you reward or not!

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