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The heat wave It's very hot in Seoul these days. I got messages about the heat wave warning from government. The massage said "Stop going out and drink water affluently. The daytime highs is 35 degrees Celsius these days. It's the worst heat wave since summer in 1994. The highest temperature is 38.4 degrees in1994 in korea and It's 5th highest temperature is 38.0 degrees on 24. 7.2018 since 1907. I don't have a air conditioning in my house so I feel like my body is burning. I take a shower three or four times a day but It is no use getting away from the heat. My office is very cold. It's so cold that I wear long sleeve shirts. I wouldn like going home but It's time to get off work

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The heat wave

It has been very hot in Seoul recently.
I got a message warning about the heat wave from the government.
The message said "Stop going out and drink much water. The daytime high is recently 35 Celsius. It's the worst heat wave since the summer of 1994. The highest temperature was 38.4 degrees in 1994 in Korea and the temperature is 38.0 degrees on 24. 7.2018.
I don't have air conditioning in my house so I feel like my body is burning.
I take a shower three or four times a day but It is no use getting away from the heat.
My office is very cold. It's so cold that I wear long sleeve shirts. I do not like going home but it's time to get off work.

very well written!

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