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Responding to Survey Questions Both options have their advantages, and I can see why some colleague would prefer Option A. If I had to choose one, however, there are several reasons why Option B would be my preference. First, It would be more comfortable to stay in the restaurant then have a barbeque in the beach. The average temperature is high in July, especially in the middle of the day. If we choose to have a lunch in the beach, I think we would not enjoy the barbeque because of the weather. However, we stay in the restaurant with the air conditioner would be more pleasant. Second, we already had a barbeque last month. Even though most of the people like barbeque, I think it is time to change different type of the food. I saw the review of the restaurant; most customers commented their food is good and fresh. I think my colleague would like these as well. So for the reasons I have outlined, I feel Option B is the better choice.

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Responding to Survey Questions

Both options have their advantages, and I can see why others would prefer Option A. If I had to choose one, however, there are several reasons why I would prefer Option B would be my preference.

First, it would be more comfortable to stay in the restaurant than*  to have a barbeque on the beach. The average temperature is high in July, especially in the middle of the day, so if we choose to have a lunch on the beach, I think we would not enjoy the barbeque because of the weather. However, if we stay in the restaurant with the air conditioning, it would be more pleasant.

Second, we already had a barbeque last month. Even though most everyone likes barbeque, I think it is time to change to a different type of the food. I saw some reviews of the restaurant and most customers said their food was fresh and delicious. I think my colleagues would like the restaurant, as well.

So for the reasons I have outlined, I feel Option B is the better choice.


* "Than" is used when comparing things. "Then" is used when talking about time. Ex: Once we leave, then we will go to the car


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