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First Weekend In The States The Americans always hold great parties and doing things crazy, I want to talk about my experiences of the American parties in Michigan. The story began when I walked to my door room after finished the freshman welcome ceremony. I decided to go to my new roommates' party immediately when I went back to the dorm room and met them who just moved in and ask if I want to go to party. They are so nice. They try to keep a good conversation, even though my English speaking isn't good enough to talk smoothly. We headed to the place where the party took place, and I stunned at the first time I saw the crowed people dance together, singing and drinking beer. The population of how many people joined the party is more than the population of how many people attends freshman welcome ceremony earlier! I meet many friends, including the leader of the Student Association and the leader of their fraternity, who was introduced by my roommates. The only thing I can do at the party is saying "Hi! I'm Umas (shaking hands)" and remembering their names which are impossible to remember because there are too many people! Actually, I didn't have the intention to know their names because I would forget if after drunk after all. And I guess the friends I just met will forget my name and ask it at the next party. After I woke up in the next day, I realize that U.S. university is designed for holding a party regarding entertainment! The pop songs, the dorm rooms, the dances, the games, the lifestyles...etc. I really enjoy their party, and I wish to go again soon, thanks to my roommates who invite me, and hope that they won't get sick every morning after the party night.

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First Weekend In The States

The Americans always hold great parties and do crazy things. I want to talk about my experiences at an American party in Michigan.
The story began when I walked to my door room after finishing the freshman welcome ceremony. I decided to go to my new roommates' party immediately when I went back to the dorm room and met them who just moved in and ask if I want to go to party. Immediately after getting back to my dorm, my roommates invited me to their party, and I decided to go. They are so nice. They try to keep a good conversation, even though my English speaking isn't good enough to talk smoothly. We headed to the place where the party was at, and I was shocked when I first saw the crowed people dancing together, singing and drinking beer. The population of how many people joined the party is more than the population of how many people attends freshman welcome ceremony earlier! There were more people there than at the freshman welcome ceremony! I met many friends, including the leader of the Student Association and the leader of their fraternity, who was introduced by my roommates. The only thing I could say at the party was say"Hi! I'm Umas (shakes hand)" and remember their names, which are impossible to remember because there are too many people! Actually, I didn't have the intention to know their names because I would forget them when I was drunk. And I guess the friends I just met will forget my name and ask it at the next party. 

After I woke up in the next day, I realized that U.S. university is designed for holding parties to entertain! The pop songs, the dorm rooms, the dances, the games, the lifestyles...etc.
I really enjoyed their party, and I wish to go again soon, thanks to my roommates who invite me. I hope that they won't get sick every morning after the party night.


Nice job, Umas. I'm glad you're making friends and enjoying the party life at your college! Keep practicing English, and if you have any questions, ask me! :) 

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The Americans always hold great parties and do crazy things. I want to talk about my experiences of the American parties in Michigan.
The story began when I walked to my door room after finishing the freshman welcome ceremony. I decided to go to my new roommates' party immediately when I went back to the dorm room and met them who had just moved in and they asked if I wanted to go to a party. They were so nice. They tried to keep a good conversation, even though my English speaking wasn't good enough to talk smoothly.
We headed to the place where the party took place, and I was stunned at the first time I saw the crowd of people dancing together, singing and drinking beer. The population of how many people joined the party was more than the population of how many people had attended freshman welcome ceremony earlier! I met many friends, including the leader of the Student Association and the leader of their fraternity, who my roommates introduced to me. The only thing I could do at the party was to say, "Hi! I'm Umas (shaking hands)" and remembering their names which was impossible to remember because there were too many people! Actually, I didn't have the intention to know their names because I would forget if I was after drunk after all. And I guessed the friends I just met would forget my name and ask it at the next party.
After I woke up in the next day, I realized that U.S. universities are designed for holding an entertaining party regarding entertainment! The pop songs, the dorm rooms, the dances, the games, the lifestyles...etc.
I really enjoyed their party, and I wish to go again soon, thanks to my roommates who invited me, and hope that they won't get sick every morning after the party night.
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The Americans always hold great parties and do crazy things. I want to talk about my experiences of the American parties in Michigan.
The story began when I walked to my door room after finishing the freshman welcome ceremony. I decided to go to my new roommates' party immediately when I went back to the dorm room and met them who had just moved in and they asked if I wanted to go to a party. They were so nice. They tried to keep a good conversation, even though my English speaking wasn't good enough to talk smoothly.
We headed to the place where the party took place, and I was stunned at the first time I saw the crowd of people dancing together, singing and drinking beer. The population of how many people joined the party was more than the population of how many people had attended freshman welcome ceremony earlier! I met many friends, including the leader of the Student Association and the leader of their fraternity, who my roommates introduced to me. The only thing I could do at the party was to say, "Hi! I'm Umas (shaking hands)" and remembering their names which was impossible to remember because there were too many people! Actually, I didn't have the intention to know their names because I would forget if I was after drunk after all. And I guessed the friends I just met would forget my name and ask it at the next party.
After I woke up in the next day, I realized that U.S. universities are designed for holding an entertaining party regarding entertainment! The pop songs, the dorm rooms, the dances, the games, the lifestyles...etc.
I really enjoyed their party, and I wish to go again soon, thanks to my roommates who invited me, and hope that they won't get sick every morning after the party night.
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The Americans always hold great parties and do crazy things. I want to talk about my experiences of the American parties in Michigan.
The story began when I walked to my door room after finishing the freshman welcome ceremony. I decided to go to my new roommates' party immediately when I went back to the dorm room and met them who had just moved in and they asked if I wanted to go to a party. They were so nice. They tried to keep a good conversation, even though my English speaking wasn't good enough to talk smoothly.
We headed to the place where the party took place, and I was stunned at the first time I saw the crowd of people dancing together, singing and drinking beer. The population of how many people joined the party was more than the population of how many people had attended freshman welcome ceremony earlier! I met many friends, including the leader of the Student Association and the leader of their fraternity, who my roommates introduced to me. The only thing I could do at the party was to say, "Hi! I'm Umas (shaking hands)" and remembering their names which was impossible to remember because there were too many people! Actually, I didn't have the intention to know their names because I would forget if I was after drunk after all. And I guessed the friends I just met would forget my name and ask it at the next party.
After I woke up in the next day, I realized that U.S. universities are designed for holding an entertaining party regarding entertainment! The pop songs, the dorm rooms, the dances, the games, the lifestyles...etc.
I really enjoyed their party, and I wish to go again soon, thanks to my roommates who invited me, and hope that they won't get sick every morning after the party night.
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The Americans always hold great parties and do crazy things. I want to talk about my experiences of the American parties in Michigan.
The story began when I walked to my door room after finishing the freshman welcome ceremony. I decided to go to my new roommates' party immediately when I went back to the dorm room and met them who had just moved in and they asked if I wanted to go to a party. They were so nice. They tried to keep a good conversation, even though my English speaking wasn't good enough to talk smoothly.
We headed to the place where the party took place, and I was stunned at the first time I saw the crowd of people dancing together, singing and drinking beer. The population of how many people joined the party was more than the population of how many people had attended freshman welcome ceremony earlier! I met many friends, including the leader of the Student Association and the leader of their fraternity, who my roommates introduced to me. The only thing I could do at the party was to say, "Hi! I'm Umas (shaking hands)" and remembering their names which was impossible to remember because there were too many people! Actually, I didn't have the intention to know their names because I would forget if I was after drunk after all. And I guessed the friends I just met would forget my name and ask it at the next party.
After I woke up in the next day, I realized that U.S. universities are designed for holding an entertaining party regarding entertainment! The pop songs, the dorm rooms, the dances, the games, the lifestyles...etc.
I really enjoyed their party, and I wish to go again soon, thanks to my roommates who invited me, and hope that they won't get sick every morning after the party night.

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