My trip in Andalucia Two years ago, in october, we have decided to go to Andalucia. At the beginning, we wanted to go by car, but it was so far and we went by fly. We flew from Lyon to Madrid and afte

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My trip in Andalucia Two years ago, in october, we have decided to go to Andalucia. At the beginning, we wanted to go by car, but it was so far and we went by fly. We flew from Lyon to Madrid and after getting the rent car, we went to our first home in Alcorcon. We visited Madrid, it's a real beatiful city. The next day, we drove to Seville and, in Seville, we visited the Alhambra and ate chocolate con churros. We also visited Cordoue. There is a Cathedral-Mosque, it's a building which has changed often of worship. It's a medium-sized city with some little street. The third destination was Sanlucar de Barameda at the mouth of Guadalquivir. It was the first time we could leave our trousers and sweat to put short and Tshirt. As soon as we arrived, we sat on a square to eat a loads of tapas. It was really fun ;-) We went to gibraltar and Cadix where there is church with an amazing crypt. The fourth and last stop was in Granada. We stayed 2 two in the neighorhood of Albacyn right in front of the Alhambra. When we arrived , we were lucky to meet a nice owner. Although it's late, he made us visit the neighorhood by night.

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My trip to Andalucia

Two years ago, In October 2016, we have decided to go to Andalucia.
In the beginning, we wanted to go by car, but it was so far so and we decided to went by fly.
We flew from Lyon to Madrid and after that, we rented a car and went to our first home in Alcorcon.
We visited Madrid, which is a really beautiful city.
The next day, we drove to Seville and ate chocolate con churros at the Alhambra. [This line is fine in spoken English, but I'm making it shorter]
We also visited Cordoue, which is a medium-sized city with some small streets. There is a Cathedral-Mosque, it's a building which has changed often of worship. [This part is unclear]
The third destination was Sanlucar de Barameda at the mouth of Guadalquivir. It was the first time we could leave our trousers behind and sweat to put on shorts and T-shirts.
As soon as we arrived, we sat on a square to eat a loads of tapas. It was really fun ;-)
We went to Gibraltar and Cadix where there is a church with an amazing crypt.
The fourth and last stop was in Granada.
We stayed 2 two in the neighbourhood of Albacyn right in front of the Alhambra for two days.
When we arrived, we were lucky to meet the nice owner.
Although it was late, he made us visit the neighbourhood by night.

My trip in Andalucia

Two years ago, in October, we have decided to go to Andalucia.

At the beginning, we wanted to go by car, but it was so far, that we decided to fly. and we went by fly.

We flew from Lyon to Madrid and after getting the rent car, we went/ drove to our first home in Alcorcon.

We visited Madrid, it's a real beautiful city. The next day, we drove to Seville and there in Seville, we visited the Alhambra and ate chocolate con churros. We also visited Cordoue. There is a Cathedral-Mosque, it's a building which has often changed often of it’s denominated of worship. It's a medium-sized city with some little streets.

The third destination was Sanlucar de Barameda at the mouth of Guadalquivir. It was the first time we could leave our trousers and sweat to put on shorts and T-shirts. ( It was the first place where it was warm enough to change from trousers to shorts)

As soon as we arrived, we sat on in a square to eat and ate a loads of tapas.It was really fun ;-)

We went to Gibraltar and Cadiz where there is church with an amazing crypt.

The fourth and last stop was in Granada. We stayed 2 two in the neighorhood neighbourhood of Albacyn right in front of the Alhambra. When we arrived , we were lucky to meet the a nice owner.

Although it's was late, he insisted we made us visit the neighorhood neighbourhood by night.

Sounds like a nice trip, in English the days days of the week and months of the year are always capitalized. You say in you notebook that you visited the Alhambra in Seville and Granada. The Alhambra is only in Granada. Thank you for correcting my French notebook.

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