My little dog
I bought a small dog from bazzar the day before last. It is very small. It was born one month ago. It's the first time that the dog leave his mother and come my home. It was very pavid when it stayed at my home at the first night.it barked all the night so that i couldn't sleep. so I decided to give the dog to other person the next day. but. Gradually， the little dog eats some food and adapts to the new environment. I feel very happy when I see this change from the dog.but. Unluckily. I must deal with the shit and piss. it is so dirty.[emoji][emoji][emoji]
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I bought a small dog from a bazaar bazzar the day before last yesterday. It is very small. It was born one month ago. It's the first time that the dog leaveleft hisits mother and come came my home with me. It was very pavid timid when it stayed at my home at for the first night.it barked all the night so that i couldn't sleep. so I decided to give the dog to other another person away the next day. but. Gradually， the little dog started to eat eats some food and adapts adapted to the its new environment. Though I feel very happy when I see this change from the dog.but. Unluckily. I must still need to clean up after it and i find it and piss. it is so dirty.[emoji][emoji][emoji]
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Unluckily. I must deal with the shit and piss. it is so dirty.
'Shit and piss' sound quite strong. For this type of register you could use 'poo and pee' which sound less strong. Even the phrasal verb 'clean up after' is enough to indicate what you are talking about.
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