practice- A recent restaurant I recently ate at a grilled fish restaurant. It was delicious！ I ordered the Lobster sauce grilled fish and comes with bean curd, fish tofu, konjac filament and needle mu

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practice- A recent restaurant I recently ate at a grilled fish restaurant. It was delicious！ I ordered the Lobster sauce grilled fish and comes with bean curd, fish tofu, konjac filament and needle mushroom. The fish it’s Wujiang river fish. That fish doesn't have much fishbone, so easy to ate. I had drink, it's a bunch of plum soup , that's the best drinks with grilled fish.The waiter served me hot pepper sauce, this is a spicy sauce but good with grilled fish. Because the restaurant is Chinese so there not have dessert. But I get the free popcorn when I finished grilled fish. Everything was fresh and delicious so I will probably go again.

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Practice - A recent restaurant.

I recently ate at a grilled fish restaurant. It was delicious!
I ordered the Lobster sauce grilled fish and it came with bean curd, fish tofu, konja(c)ku filament and needle mushroom. The fish was Wujiang river fish. That fish didn't have much fish bone, so it was easy to eat.
I had a drink, it's a bunch of plum soup, that's the best drinks with grilled fish. The waiter served me hot pepper sauce, this is a spicy sauce but good with grilled fish.
Because The restaurant was Chinese though so there was no dessert. But I did however get the free popcorn when I finished the grilled fish. Everything was fresh and delicious so I will probably go again.

Sounds delicious! :) Not a bad attempt, well written :)

Try to remember we don't start our sentences with conjunctions in most cases, words like and, but or because. On a smaller note, a lot of your sentences weren't exactly wrong but your tense needs to flow through your writing, meaning if you start your story in the past tense, it needs to maintain that tense, so stay the same :)

Hope this is helpful for you :)

practice- A recent restaurant

I recently ate at a grilled fish restaurant. It was delicious！
I ordered the lobster sauce grilled fish and it came with bean curd, fish tofu, konjac filament and needle mushroom. The fish is Wujiang river fish. That fish doesn't have much fishbone so is easy to eat.
I had a drink of plum soup. That's the best drink with grilled fish. The waiter served me hot pepper sauce, a spicy sauce but good with grilled fish.
Because the restaurant is Chinese there was no dessert. But I got free popcorn when I finished the grilled fish. Everything was fresh and delicious so I will probably go again.

Very well written!

practice- A recent restaurant

I recently ate at a grilled fish restaurant. It was delicious！<-(The food/meal was delicious)
I ordered the Lobster sauce grilled fish and comes with bean curd, fish tofu, konjac filament and needle mushroom. The fish it’s Wujiang river fish. That fish doesn't have much fishbone, so easy to eat.(it was delicious would be better here)
I had a drink, it was plum soup , that's the best drink to have with grilled fish.The waiter served me hot pepper sauce, this is a spicy sauce but good with grilled fish.
Because the restaurant is Chinese there is no dessert. But I get the free popcorn when I finished grilled fish. Everything was fresh and delicious so I will probably go again.

You have already said it was delicious at the beginning

"because everything was fresh and delicious" = makes it clearer you are emphasising it was delicious and not clumsy writting, you purposefully wanted to write again it was "fresh and delicious"

for the first line, some English natives may say/ask what was delicious the "restaurant ? !1" .

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