Safety in country
It is said that Japan is a safety country. But nowaday you can't say that. The number of the criminals has incruded enough. The childlen also go to school with group or with their parents.It's better to pay attention what you bring and especially when you walk outside at night it's better to walk the load where it's light ant there are the people.
I don't know well about the situation of other country but maybe it's different between each countries. Next week I'll be in Ireland, but I don't know how much should I pay attention actually. I'll do minimum things to protect me
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Safety in country
It is said believed that Japan is a safety country, however, nowadays you can't say that. Crime is on the rise where children often go to school in a group or with their parents. The number of the criminals has incruded enough. The childlen also go to school with group or with their parents.It's better to pay attention to what you have on you; and especially when you walk outside at night. It's better to walk on the lit roads outside where there are other people around. the load where it's light ant there are the people.Other countries may be different. I don't know well about the situation of other country but maybe it's different between each countries. Next week I'll be in Ireland, but I don't know how much I should actually I pay attention actually. I'll do everything I can minimum things to protect myself.
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It is said that Japan is a safe country, but nowadays you can't say that. The number of the criminals has increased. Children also go to school in groups or with their parents. Pay attention to what you have on your person (you can also say on yourself) and especially be careful when you walk outside at night. It's best to walk where there is light and where there are people.
I don't know how it is in other countries, but maybe it's different in other countries. Next week I'll be in Ireland, but I don't know how careful I should be. I'll do the minimum amount of things to protect myself. (I think you actually mean You'll do the maximum amount of things to protect yourself, but I corrected your sentence incase you really mean minimum. )
I don't know how it is in other countries, but maybe it's different in other countries. Next week I'll be in Ireland, but I don't know how careful I should be. I'll do the minimum amount of things to protect myself. (I think you actually mean You'll do the maximum amount of things to protect yourself, but I corrected your sentence incase you really mean minimum. )
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