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dears, it's me again. thank you all for your kind help. ^_^ Question: Many people argue that nowadays consumers buy lots of goods they don’t actually need because they are influenced by advertisements. To what extent do you agree or disagree? The issue whether the majority of people are influenced by different kinds of advertisements so as to purchase a number of commodities they do not need in fact has sparked off an intense debate in the current society. From my perspective, the impact of other factors such as peer effect and sales by merchandise outweighs the impact of advertisements. Indeed, it is widely known that advertisements play an important role in attracting people’s eyes and prompting the sales. Also, advertisements tend to exaggerate the quality and usefulness of goods tempting people to buy what they do not really require without hesitation. Whereas, the effects are limited since consumers gradually realize that most of the ads are deceptive. Instead, recent years have witnessed the rise of peer influence that people especially youngsters are easily influenced by peers. Given that peer pressure, teenagers tend to purchase something that others obsess as well regardless of whether it is useful for them. Then these things of no use may be discarded by people, which means a waste of money. In addition, sales of a variety companies may exert a significant impact on customers. When there are discounts on some commodities, people are easily immersed in shopping without any hesitation. That is mainly because that consumers are inclined to believe that it is worth buying these goods on sale due to their cheap price. To conclude, although advertisements have a certain influence on customers’ purchasing behavior. However, compared with advertisements, peer influence and sales effect are the major contributing factors to people buying a considerable number of goods they do not need.

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Instead, recent years have witnessed the rise of peer pressure influence that where people, especially youngsters are easily influenced by their peers. Given that Under peer pressure, teenagers tend to purchase some things that others obsess over as well regardless of whether it is useful for to them or not. Then these things that are of no use may be later discarded by them people, which means a waste of money. 


In addition, sales of by a variety of companies may exert a significant impact on customers. When there are discounts on some commodities, people are easily engaged in impulse buying immersed in shopping without any hesitation. This is mainly because that consumers are inclined to believe that it is worth buying these goods on sale due to their cheaper price (or due to their perceived good value).

To conclude, although advertisements have a certain influence on customers’ purchasing behaviour. However , i strongly feel that (because the question asked to what extent you agree/disagree, safer to just answer ) compared with advertisements, peer influence peer pressure , and sales and discounts effect are the major contributing factors to people buying a considerable number of goods they do not need.

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"...has sparked an intense debate..." Perfectly fine, but I just wanted to offer some other suggestions so you have other options that you can use if you like :

"People have differing views/opinions/perceptive on ...."
"On(or When talking about) the topic/issue/problem of .... , everyone has their own opinion/view"

impulse buying = buying things without planing in advance or without thinking about it. Just "buying on impulse" maybe under peer pressure or after seeing an ad.

You did a great job Effy, hope this helps. Keep on writing.

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dears, it's me again. thank you all for your kind help. ^_^

Question: Many people argue that nowadays consumers buy lots of goods they don’t actually need because they are influenced by advertisements. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The issue whether the majority of people are influenced by different kinds of advertisements so as to purchase a number of (you can delete "a number of" if you like) commodities they do not need in fact has sparked off an intense debate in the current society. From my perspective, the impact of other factors such as peer pressure effect and sales by merchandising outweighs the impact of advertisements.  (normally its peer pressure. peer effect does not sound right)

Indeed, it is widely known that advertisements play an important role in attracting people’s attention eyes and prompting the driving sales. Also, advertisements tend to exaggerate the quality and usefulness of goods tempting people to buy what they do not really require without hesitation things they may not need out of impulse. Whereas, But I think the effects of these ads are limited since consumers will gradually (or eventually) realize that most of these ads are deceptive.

Italki does not allow me to post under one correction so I need to split into two

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The young is a target group for marketers. Sellers use sensitive period of young people for selling them useless goods.
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yes, especially the teenagers tend to follow their peers so as to do something irrationally.
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This material world is crazy. Some people haven't any clothes for years, some people don't know how to spend their huge sack of money. But there is no doubt that peer effect is pretty viral amonst the youngsters. Good article!

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