How do animals feel living in zoos?
There are so many zoos all around the world. Some people think animals feel uncomfortable in zoos, others think differently. So, what is the truth? Let us find it out.
My personal point of view is that animals need more freedom and therefore they feel uncomfortable. Because for normal life animals should live in their natural habitats where they can hunt and procreate. Also there are many animals in need special climatic conditions. For example: polar bear, elephant, giraffe etc. Zoos can't do these conditions more realistic than they do anyway.
However, there are some people who have another point of view. They believe there are so many pluses of animal living in zoos. Firstly, animals are always fed, they don't need to provide for food and don't die of hunger. Secondly, people enjoy watching them.
To tell the truth I disagree with opposing opinion. The fact that animals are fed means they lead a passive lifestyle which is why they lose their natural skills. Also I think in most cases watching people make animals so nervous.
In summary I want to say we shouldn't interfere with nature and catch animals to keep them in zoos.
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*** I like your article. Just a few commas before adverbs at the beginning or end of a sentence. (like also, anyway)
**** Try not not to start a sentence with a conjunction such as Because, And or But. You can replace the preceding period with a semicolon and make the 'b' lowercase; that's a general, simple fix. Consider removing the word because and capitalising For
How do animals feel living in zoos?
There are so many zoos all around the world. Some people think animals feel uncomfortable in zoos; others think differently. So, what is the truth? Let us find it out.
My personal point of view is that animals need more freedom and therefore they feel uncomfortable. Because for normal life animals should live in their natural habitats where they can hunt and procreate. Also, there are many animals in need special climatic conditions. For example: polar bear, elephant, giraffe etc. Zoos can't do these conditions more realistic than they do, anyway.
However, there are some people who have another point of view. They believe there are so many pluses of animal living in zoos. Firstly, animals are always fed, they don't need to provide for food and don't die of hunger. Secondly, people enjoy watching them.
To tell the truth I disagree with opposing opinion. The fact that animals are fed means they lead a passive lifestyle which is why they lose their natural skills. Also, I think in most cases watching people make animals so nervous.
In summary, I want to say we shouldn't interfere with nature and catch animals to keep them in zoos.
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