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Ek choti teeppani mera naya kam ke bare me. Tin sal pehle ek Mohamad yunus ka Tedx talk dekkar mujhe Microfinance ke bare me pata chala! Ek mahine se maine ek naya kam shuru kiya. Ismen, main garibon ko uddar de sakta hun. Har halaton me main unko pesa nahi de sakta. Kum se kum, garibon ko kuch project banana chaye. Agar unko kuch jankari ki zarurat hai, tab ham unki madad karte hai sab kagazon tayar karne ke liye, ya aane vale paranamon ke yojne banane ke liye. Iske bad, unke saath bat karna hai, unki halat, maksad ya marzi samjane ke liye. Hamko logon ke yogyaton par bharosa hai, chahe wo abhi kuch dushwar ke samey samna karthe hai. Ham jante hai ki uddhar dena kabhi qatarnak ho sakta hai, lekin jab main dekhta hun ki ek aurat ki zindagi itna badal sakta hai iske vajah se, tab main bas santosh men ho jata hun. I discovered Microfinance three years back after seeing a tedx talk from mohamad yunus. Since one month I started a new job. I can give loans to people in need. I can't give them money in every situations. Poor should have least have a project in mind. If they need any information, then we help them to prepare all papers or to make the plan of the future results. Afterward, we have to discuss with them to understand their situation, objective or wish. We trust people, even if they face tough times. We know that lending money can be sometimes dangerous, but when I see than a woman's life can change that much because of it, I am satistied. Thank you for helping! I know there are a bunch of mistakes as it's been a while I've not written a note! ;)

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Tin sal pehle ek Mohamad yunus ka Tedx talk dekkar mujhe Microfinance ke bare me pata chala. Ek mahine se maine ek naya kam shuru kiya. Ismen, main garibon ko uddar de sakta hun. Har halaton me main unko pesa nahi de sakta. Kum se kum, garibon ko kuch project banana chaye. Agar unko kuch jankari ki zarurat hai, tab ham unki madad karte hai sab kagazon tayar karne ke liye, ya aane vale paranamon ke yojne banane ke liye. Iske bad, unke saath bat karna hoti  hai, unki halat, maksad or  marzi samajane ke liye. Hamai logon ki  yogyata par bharosa hai. chahe wo abhi kuch dushwar ke samey samna karthe hai. Ham jante hai ki uddhar dena kabhi bhi  qatarnak ho sakta hai, lekin jab main dekhta hun ki ek aurat ki zindagi itna badal sakta hai iske vajah se, tab main bas khush   ho jata hun.

I discovered Microfinance three years back after seeing a tedx talk from mohamad yunus. Since one month I started a new job. I can give loans to people in need. I can't give them money in every situations. Poor should have least have a project in mind. If they need any information, then we help them to prepare all papers or to make the plan of the future results. Afterward, we have to discuss with them to understand their situation, objective or wish. We trust people, even if they face tough times. We know that lending money can be sometimes dangerous, but when I see than a woman's life can change that much because of it, I am satistied.

Thank you for helping! I know there are a bunch of mistakes as it's been a while I've not written a note! ;)
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I started a new job = main ne naya kaam shur kia (Kaam is transitive verb)

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