A Thought

This morning it rained heavily.  I like the rain.  It makes the air fresh and feel cool.  Some people maybe hate rains, coz because 1 it will make them they will get wet and take if they do not carry an umbrellar with them.   I dont think so . disagree 2.  Rain is the best gift the from nature gives us.  Without rain the it, crops can't would not grow and we will have there will be no food to eat. Without rain,  the rivers will go dry.  So rain is a good thing.  I love the rain.  on the other hand ,it Rain can symbolically clean our mind and soul.  We can reborn anew from the rain.

1.  Don't use slang in your essays.  It would be like going outdoors wearing a shirt with no pants!

2.  Here's a new phrase for you.  "I beg to differ."

You need to leave 2 spaces after a period!  This is a punctuation identation rule. 我 = I and not i.  Good content.

thought

This morning it rained heavily.i like rain,it makes the air fresh and feels cool.some people may hate rain, cause it will make them wet and they will have to take an umbrellar with them. I dont think so . rain is the best gift the nature gives us. Without rain the crops cant grow and we will have no food to eat. Without rain the rivers will dry. So rain is a good thing. I love rain. On the other hand ,it can clean our mind and soul, we can be reborn from the rain.