1) 'Had' implies just possessing bangs. We usually use 'got' when discussing a new haircut or change in appearance. You could also say "After I got my bangs cut..." which is more specific. 2) When quoting a friend saying a sentence, make sure their sentence is capitalized too. 3) "So, I'm really happy now" isn't necessarily wrong, it sounds more fluent without the comma. - I looked it up and the English name for the show is The Apothecary Diaries. What is the show about? Why do you like it?