My husband and I went to Okayama prefecture and Hiroshima prefecture by train for sightseeing from August 25 to August 26. It was a one night and two days trip. We woke up at 4:00 and left home at 5:00 in the morning . We transferred several times to go to Hinase station by local train. I was very tired. We ate a Japanese oyster pancake for lunch. The oyster was very big and dough was crispy on the outside fluffy on the inside. I really like it. After eating we missed the train, because the train comes once in an hour and the restaurant was quite far from the station. So, we walked to the cozy beach for a while. We arrived at Kurashiki station at 2:30 in the afternoon. We walked around the Kurashiki Bikan historical area. We took pictures of beautiful scenery. My husband bought a grey T-shirts and a red cotton bag for me. It was cute and I love it. After that we went to an outlet mall for window shopping. It was hot and humid. I sweated a lot. We checked in the hotel in Hiroshima at 8:00. I spent 10 hours on the train. I had spent quite some time sightseeing. It was a tiring (but fulfilling?) day.

Hi Banboke, your suggested corrections are below. Well done, your description was very good. Sounds like a great trip too! My husband and I went to Okayama prefecture and Hiroshima prefecture by train for sightseeing from August 25 to August 26. It was a one night and two day trip. We woke up at 4:00 and left home at 5:00 in the morning . We transferred several times to go to Hinase station by local train. I was very tired. We ate a Japanese oyster pancake for lunch. The oyster was very big and the dough was crispy on the outside and fluffy on the inside. I really liked it. After eating, we missed the train because the train comes once an hour. The restaurant was quite far from the station. So, we walked to the cozy beach for a while. We arrived at Kurashiki station at 2:30 in the afternoon. We walked around the Kurashiki Bikan historical area. We took pictures of beautiful scenery. He bought grey T-shirts and a red cotton bag for me. It was cute and I love it. After that, we went to an outlet mall for window shopping. It was hot and humid. I sweated a lot. We checked in at the hotel in Hiroshima at 8:00. I spent 10 hours on the train. I spent quite a lot of time sightseeing. It was a tiring day.