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Diep Deon
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7 maj 2024 17:18
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My biggest culture shock is that Westerners shower in the morning. Where I come from, we usually shower after returning home or after eating dinner because we like our bodies clean before we go to bed or turn in for the night. The idea of going to bed with your body not that clean is not that appealing to me. Westerners shower in the morning and then just go to work. That sounds very strange to me.
Refrain from using the word “just” too many times, it is tautology. Also in this case, appealing works better than pleasing because appealing means attractive while pleasing means giving pleasure, cheer, gratification or enjoyment. While pleasing is not necessarily grammatical wrong, appealing is a better word choice and sounds better. Also your tenses could use some work. I hope my review helps. If you have any more questions, you can send me a message. Cheers!
7 maja 2024
Thank you, I will try to get better next time.
8 maja 2024
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Diep Deon
Znajomość języków
angielski, japoński, wietnamski
Język do nauczenia się
angielski, japoński
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