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Hello everyone i have tried to write a little song. can you tell me is there any grammatical error? ? Thank you very much!
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In a world so vast, where meaning seems lost
Question: existence. The ultimate cost
Born into this chaos, mere side effect
The power to make our lives connect
Born into this chaos, side effect
Puzzle incomplete
We wander through the shadows, searching for light
In the depths of our souls, we ignite (we ignite)
Life's true beauty lies in the journey we tread
But we hold the power to make our lives connect.
Life, a puzzle incomplete.
Find the missing pieces, make it sweet.
No purpose by default,
it's up to you and me to give it meaning. Spirits free.
A Puzzle incomplete
31 lip 2023 16:30
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How lovely that you’ve written a song, thanks for sharing it. Since you have artistic license with lyrics, I can’t tell you that the sentences are incomplete because it’s poetic. I don’t see any grammatical errors though, congratulations!
Only two small errors in your  opening question: … can you tell me if there are any errors…(are/errors)
31 lipca 2023
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Znajomość języków
angielski, włoski, japoński
Język do nauczenia się
angielski, japoński
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