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Kaori
90 day's training: Day 33
Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. đ°
1) I visited a piano concert today. All programs were classical music for four hands.
2) My former teacher played them. Her sounds are always really beautiful and deeply fascinated.
3) I greeted her after the concert. I was happy to meeting her.
We promised to meet again soon.
4) I've been preparing for her lesson. I want to play a Mozart piano piece.
5) She also said me to take the time for lunch together and to talk about each experience in Austria. I'm looking forward to it.
20 paĆș 2024 11:08
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90 day's training: Day 33
Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. đ°
1) I went to/attended a piano concert today. All the pieces were (or the program was) classical music for four hands.
2) My former teacher played them. Her playing is always really beautiful and deeply fascinating.
3) I greeted her after the concert. I was happy to see her.
We promised to meet again soon.
4) I've been preparing for a lesson wih her. I want to play a Mozart piano piece.
5) She suggested we get together for lunch to talk about our experience(s) in Austria. I'm looking forward to it.
VISIT a concert sounds like you just stopped there for a few minutes but didn't stay. PROGRAMS implies more than one concert. SAID cannot have an indirect object ('said me smth' is incorrect).
21 paĆșdziernika 2024
90 day's training: Day 33 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in
advance. đ° 1) I visited a piano concert today. All the programmes were classical
music for four hands (Iâve no idea what you mean here. What is 4 hands?) 2) My former teacher played them. Her sounds (what do you mean here?) are always
really beautiful and deeply fascinating. 3) I greeted her after the concert. I
was happy to meet her. We promised to meet again soon. 4) I've been preparing
for her lesson. I want to play a Mozart piano piece. 5) She also suggested to/ told me to take
the time for lunch together and to talk about each experience in Austria. I'm
looking forward to it.
Sorry to say Kaori but today isnât one of your better pieces of work. Too many silly mistakes with your tenses and vocabulary choices. For example, fascinating is the adjective, fascinated the adverb. I was fascinated by her work. Her work was fascinating.
Keep working hard my friend and you will improve more. Looking forward to seeing Day 34 tomorrow.
Maybe think too about booking a lesson with one of the many wonderful teachers on Italki? Itâs a great way to learn
20 paĆșdziernika 2024
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