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My hometown is close to Jiangxi province. In light of this fact,I prefer all the spicy food. Among these food,hotpot is my favorite. So I often hang out to eat hotpot with my friends. What a pleasant thing!!
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22 paź 2020 06:08
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My hometown is close to Jiangxi province. Because of this, I prefer spicy food. Among these foods,hotpot is my favorite. So I often hang out with my friends and eat hotpot. It's a pleasant thing to do!
You did really well but it just needed some corrections. I've written it in a way that is more commonly used. I hope this helps!
22 października 2020
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