Znajdź nauczycieli angielski
Reys
Is this sentence correct???He explains that there were poverty in the countryside
hello all
He explains that there were poverty in the countryside; low payment to public employees; high prices for goods and services; pressure on commercial private initiative; lack of equipment and skills in agriculture; and general discontent in the society.
19 kwi 2015 22:19
Odpowiedzi · 1
1
He explains that there was/is poverty in the countryside, low payment to public employees, high prices for good and services, pressure on commercial private initiative (this one is a bit weird), lack of equipment and skills in agriculture, and general discontent in (the not needed) society.
Replace semi-colons to commas, and a few word changes. Also instead of letting the sentence drag on you could put a period, add a few things.
19 kwietnia 2015
Nadal nie znalazłeś/łaś odpowiedzi?
Napisz swoje pytania i pozwól, aby rodzimi użytkownicy języka ci pomogli!
Reys
Znajomość języków
arabski, angielski, kurdyjski, perski, turecki
Język do nauczenia się
arabski, kurdyjski, perski, turecki
Artykuły, które również mogą ci się spodobać

Speak More Fluently with This Simple Technique
23 głosy poparcia · 2 Komentarze

How to Read and Understand a Business Contract in English
19 głosy poparcia · 3 Komentarze

6 Ways italki Can Help You Succeed in Your School Language Classes
15 głosy poparcia · 8 Komentarze
Więcej artykułów