Does this sentence make sense?
"I find it a little bit ironic that registration and other processes are automated at bigger hospitals these days because elderly patients don't get used to new technology quickly, yet the elderly people are a main demographic of their customers."
Yeap, makes sense.
Might be improved as below:
I find it a little bit ironic that registration and other processes are automated at 'larger' hospitals these days because elderly patients 'have trouble getting used' to new technology quickly. Yet the elderly are the main demographic of their customers.
28 maja 2015
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