Search from various angielski teachers...
Huy
Are these phrases correct?
Hi,
I've just made up this short paragraph:
If the purchasing rate of personal vehicles kept increasing like in the present, building wider roads would only address traffic congestion in the short term. Therefore, in order to thoroughly reduce road traffic, the most workable solution would be to limit personal vehicles sold to the public every year.
Could you please tell me whether "purchasing rate" and "thoroughly reduce" are correct? (By "purchasing rate", I want to describe the number of people buying personal vehicles.)
Thank you very much,
21 sty 2017 09:39
Odpowiedzi · 2
1
The passage is well written and makes sense. Your intention is clear. To make it sound more natural, I would suggest not to use thoroughly and rephrase it, a suggestion "in order to reduce total traffic".
21 stycznia 2017
Nadal nie znalazłeś/łaś odpowiedzi?
Napisz swoje pytania i pozwól, aby rodzimi użytkownicy języka ci pomogli!
Huy
Znajomość języków
angielski, wietnamski
Język do nauczenia się
angielski
Artykuły, które również mogą ci się spodobać

Same Word, Different Meaning: American, British, and South African English
14 głosy poparcia · 12 Komentarze

How to Sound Confident in English (Even When You’re Nervous)
15 głosy poparcia · 11 Komentarze

Marketing Vocabulary and Phrases for Business English Learners
12 głosy poparcia · 6 Komentarze
Więcej artykułów