What you think about this lyrics? Could you help me to improve this one? #1 Please take a rest, listen to all I want to say. I put up with your whims: but until today. "Shut your mouth and be cool" it's just what I've spelt Well that's it, now I leave, you can go to hell Well, when I'm with you it's like a war and at the war seems like at you I've had enough I buy port wine, disarm my mines and feel so blue The fight is done; the fire has died, with dust and ashes left behind. We're all alive. And, maybe, everything's all right To spite. Look, pain is pain, never mind that you called it wrong Pain is fear, love and pain never get along "Shut your mouth and be cool" it's just what I've spelt Well that's it, now I leave, you can go to hell