Discussion groups on issues related .does it make sense when describing a programme?
This is a nature/ natural programme .
It features
Novelty of themes
Quality of its presenters .
It is on ecology and environment
It includes interviews and discussion groups on issues related( to nature)
It is devoted to promote conservation of nature.
It broadcast on RTV channel.the transmission should be changed to Saturdays
Do these sentences have good grammar and sound natural?
Thank you.

Question

Discussion groups on issues related .does it make sense when describing a  programme?
This is a nature/ natural programme .
It features
Novelty of themes 
Quality of its presenters .
It is on ecology and environment 
It includes interviews and discussion groups on issues related( to nature)
It is devoted to promote conservation of nature.
It broadcast on RTV channel.the transmission should be changed to Saturdays 
Do these sentences have good grammar and sound natural?
Thank you.

Answer

Hi! Here are a few tips to improve this. I only kept the sentences that I changed. The other parts looked fine.

This is a nature programme .
It is on ecology and the environment.

It includes interviews and discussion groups on related issues. 
OR It includes interviews and discussion groups on issues related to nature.

It is devoted to promoting conservation of nature.
(Normally "to + ing" is wrong, but it is correct here)

It is broadcasted on RTV channel. The transmission should be changed to Saturdays.

Great start!

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