Do I have any mistakes in my writing below?
A week passed by so fast. I remember just asking my nephew "what's today" and he said "It's Friday" and now, it's Friday again. OMG, a week passed already? I don't even remember what I did during the past 7 days.

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Do I have any mistakes in my writing below?
A week passed by so fast.  I remember just asking my nephew "what's today" and he said "It's Friday" and now, it's Friday again.  OMG, a week passed already?  I don't even remember what I did during the past 7 days.

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A week passed by so fast. I remember just asking my nephew "what's today" and he said "It's Friday". Now, it's Friday again. OMG, a week passed already? I don't even remember what I did during the past 7 days.
I would get rid of the second "and" because the sentence becomes too long. Also saying "what day is today?" sounds a bit more correct. In spoken English people say "What's today" so its not that big of deal

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Nice work. I would write it this way

The week passed by so fast. I remember just asking my nephew "What's today?" and he said "It's Friday." Now, it's Friday again. OMG, a week passed already? I don't even remember what I did during the past seven days.

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You can put a comma before quotation marks. Also:

"a week has passed by already?"

But those are just minor things. Well written.

Cheers.

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