Please correct the sentence below
It is indeed the efforts of the manufactures to produce a car which consumers will like that lead such great progress in Japan's car industries in recent years.

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Please correct the sentence below
It is indeed the efforts of the manufactures to produce a car which consumers will like that lead such great progress in Japan's car industries in recent years.

Pleeeeeeeease:)))))

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Suggestion:

It is indeed the manufacturers' efforts  to produce a car which consumers would like that led to such great progress in Japan's car industry in recent years.

Hope that helps!
Martha

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Why use 'industries' rather than 'industry'? What are the different ones you are thinking of?

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manufacturers ?
correct for what?
grammar?
ease of reading?

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I need some further clarification.  By the use of the word 'indeed', I assume you have previously spoken of those efforts. 'Lead' is in the past tense, is it not?   I will need to change the wording, not because it is wrong, but it is confusing.