90 day's training: Day 17 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) This week I have day off. So I want to do some things which I haven't taken the time until yet. 2) Today I fina

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90 day's training: Day 17 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) This week I have day off. So I want to do some things which I haven't taken the time until yet. 2) Today I finally watched the DVD was a Xmas present from my friend. Actually she gave me five DVDs. I want to watch one more of them tomorrow or day after tomorrow. 3) I started to read a Prokofjef's piano piece. It has 13 pages therefore I have looked through all the piece roughly before I start to practice. 4) Besides the new piece I've been practicing Mozart's Variations. I've planning that I will be done until the end of October. 5) I'm looking forward to visit my ex teacher so that I take her lesson and opinions how she thinks my current playing piano style.

25 wrz 2024 08:48

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90 day's training: Day 17 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) This week I have a day off. So I want to do some things I haven't gotten around to yet. 2) Today I finally watched the DVD that my friend gave me for Xmas. Actually she gave me five DVDs. I want to watch one more of them tomorrow or day after tomorrow. 3) I started to read through a Prokofiev piano piece. It's 13 pages long, so I just sight-read though it before I started to really learn/practice it. 4) Besides the new piece, I've been practicing Mozart's Variations on . . . (see note). I'm planning to finish it by the end of October. 5) I'm looking forward to visiting my former teacher so that I take a lesson with her and hear her opinions on my current playing.

Simon's corrections are good - I'm just giving you different options in some cases. Spelling of PROKOFIEV can vary in English, since it's a Russian name, but it's usually I instead of J. You should specify which Mozart variations, since there are motre than one. In general you should specify PIANO teacher, but here it's okay as is, --since the whole thing is about piano, people should be able to figure that out. Nice job!

26 września 2024

90 day's training: Day 17 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) This week I have a day off. So I want to do some things which I haven't taken the time to do until now. 2) Today I finally watched the DVD which was a Xmas present from my friend. Actually she gave me five DVDs. I want to watch one more of them tomorrow or the day after tomorrow. 3) I started to read a piano piece by Prokofjef It has 13 pages therefore I have quickly looked through all of the piece before I start to practice. 4) Besides the new piece, I've been practicing Mozart's Variations. I'm planning to finish this by the end of October. 5) I'm looking forward to visiting my ex teacher so that I take her lesson and receive her opinions/thought on my current playing piano style.

25 września 2024

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