Losing weight is a lifelong career for girls. Although it is a little exaggerated, it is indeed an undeniable fact for me at present, especially the information I saw this morning, which makes me hav

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Ellie

Losing weight is a lifelong career for girls. Although it is a little exaggerated, it is indeed an undeniable fact for me at present, especially the information I saw this morning, which makes me have a special sense of urgency to lose weight. Excellent people are self-disciplined, I want to act! Reduce staple food intake, control the amount of dinner, come on! I can do it!

16 kwi 2024 03:22

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Hi Ellie, What an interesting topic! You wrote it well. Some corrections Especially reading/watching/considering (verb required) the information I saw this morning Makes me have a special sense- it's not wrong but feel a sense of urgency would sound more natural. Control the amount of dinner I eat. Just a comment on the topic. Looking after yourself is a good and healthy thing to do but your health is so important. Please don't diet so much that your health suffers. Take care Sian

16 kwietnia 2024

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