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To me, the most important things in life are health, safety, and love.
First, health is crucial because, without it, we can’t do anything. Last week, I had gastroenteritis. While my stomach was hurting, I couldn’t work, eat, or even talk to my family. No matter how many dreams or goals we have, we can’t pursue them if we aren’t healthy.
Safety is also essential to me. We can’t think or move freely if we are in unsafe situations. Safety means being in a situation where people feel relaxed and don’t have to worry about their well-being. Unfortunately, we are sometimes exposed to unsafe environments, such as a workplace with harassing colleagues or a home with abusive parents. Everyone could find themselves in such situations, so securing a safe space is vital in my life.
The final important thing is love. Love forms the strong foundation for everything. I believe that love and care for others shape how we act. By considering others’ feelings, we can create meaningful connections. Since we can’t avoid interacting with others as long as we live in this world, isn’t it beneficial to build better relationships through love?
7 paź 2024 04:49
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To me, the most important things in life are health, safety, and love. First,
health is crucial because, without it, we can’t do anything. Last week, I had
gastroenteritis. While my stomach was hurting, I couldn’t work, eat, or even
talk to my family. No matter how many dreams or goals we have, we can’t pursue
them if we aren’t healthy. Safety is also essential to me. We can’t think or
move freely if we are in unsafe situations. Safety means being in a situation
where people feel relaxed and don’t have to worry about their well-being.
Unfortunately, we are sometimes exposed to unsafe environments, such as a
workplace with harassing colleagues or a home with abusive parents. Everyone (Anybody)
could find themselves in such situations, so securing a safe space is vital in
my life. The final important thing is love. Love forms the strong foundation for
everything. I believe that love and care for others shape how we act. By
considering others’ feelings, we can create meaningful connections. Since we
can’t avoid interacting with others as long as we live in this world, isn’t it
beneficial to build better relationships through love?
GREAT PIECE OF WRITING. WELL DONE
7 października 2024
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