Galina
Can you check a piece of my essay, please? I also have several questions that I indicated using a slash or in brackets. Thanks in advance. Nowadays there are a lot of services for every spare of daily life. Most often surveyed residents use such services as having their haircut or having their clothes dry-cleaned. The option “having your car serviced” is more frequently cited than the option “having your home redecorated”. It is not surprising as if a car is not repaired in time it will/can (?) lead to car accident. Thus, for people taking care of a (their?) car is more important than redecorating a house that can be done only every few years. Regrettably, one problem that can arise with choosing a service company is that people can be baffled by making a choice due to having various options. I think the best solution to this problem is to check reviews (feedback? reviews or/and feedback?) on such companies in order to find the most suitable one/for a person. in conclusion I am deeply convinced that it is essential to use professional help for having something done as specialists are more qualified and experienced. Besides, they have special equipment and supplies.
27 lut 2024 13:51
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Hi Gali. Hope all is well with you? So… For every spare of life…I think you need to add a word after spare, or it doesn’t make sense. Spare what? If a car is not repaired in time, it can lead to an accident. Use can as it’s only a possibility, whereas will makes it sound much more certain and automatic that it will happen to every unrepaired car People talking care of their car…this sounds better as it’s more personal, although saying a car isn’t wrong English Check reviews You’ve written well. Good effort! I’d slightly rewrite one little bit so it sounds more natural…people can be baffled when making a choice due to having so many options/so much choice
27 lutego 2024
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