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On the other hand, consumerism not only had negative impact on consumer, but also had seriously damages in environment. One of the main environmental issue is animal issue which had been highly controversy for long time. Firstly, Cole and McCoskey (2013, p3) indicates that “The industrial, Concentrated Animal Feeding Operation (CAFO) practices of raising animals for food in confined quarters with lax restrictions on resultant pollutants are responsible for unsustainable resource use and significant air pollution and resultant climate change, water overuse and pollution, land degradation, arable soil erosion, fossil-fuel use, climate change, and biodiversity loss”. There is a extremely impact on a large scales ranging, even can be a global issue. The authors are clearly demonstrates the major point is that people take the expense of irretrievable to consuming meat, which let to badly environment for in stead. Although, consuming meat is relative necessary for people general live, which population has been growth fast in recent year. Secondly, if the issue above is still can be excusable, the following part can be say that should not necessary happened, which is species extinct issue. Take China for example, there is a article researched by Zhang, Hua and Sun (2008), “nearly 70% of mammal species in China are endangered because of hunting and habitat” (p1494). Furthermore, these are some survey about interviewee,“In the survey, 67.3% of the respondents believed that ornaments and ready-made clothes made from wildlife were beautiful”(p1505), and “among the 326 respondents who have had wild animal consumption experiences, light consumers account for 59.8%, medium consumers 28.7%, and heavy consumers 11.5%”(p1510). According to the survey, easy to know that majority of people in China had experiences of wild animal consumption, such as, utilities for clothing and for food, and some of them are extremely favourite in consuming wild animal. However, because of this kind of behavior, numerous amount of wild mammal species has sharply reducing, even become extincting. Particularly, people are not necessary to consumer wild animal, for replace, they can purchases artificial products or plant products. Unfortunately, the product like above always be cheap and public in the means of sustainability, and people behavior of consuming tend to purchase something scarce for express their standing and short hedonism. In short, people consuming behaviors might cause a
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This is a bar chart , help me correct this please . Thanks a lot
The bar graph indicates the number of money spent on four types of advertising ( television , newspaper , internet and billboards ) , measured in thousands of dollars , by two companies ( Acne and Famous ).
From the data , we recognise the largest amount of money spent on televisions by both companies , Acne estmately spent 250 thousand dollars and Famous spent 50 thousand dollars less than former ,on which there was 200 thousand dollars . The following group is newspappers , which spent half of money on television by Acne and spent almost one third of money on television by Famous ,there was 125 thousand dollars and 75 thousand dollars respectively . Conversely , the money from Famous spent on the internet ( 100 thousand dollars ) doubled in that of Acne ( 50 thousand dollars ) did . Significantly , the least amount of money spent on billboards , barely 25 thousand dollars by Acne and 23 thousand dollars by Famous .
In conclusion , televisions were the most popular advertising by both companies , whereas , billboards were the least popular advertising .
13 marca 2013
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This is a essay again . Is that someone do not mind to correct my this , thanks in advance !!!!!!!!!
Topic:In some countries around the world men and women are havingchildren late in life.
What are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?
Late to haveing babies seem to be prevalent in modern cities as men and women can live confortable and simple . Otherwise , they after work time are casual as before and probably having a busy and noisy life experience earlier .
In fact , young people who want to have babies earlier in most cites are reasonable,because a great number of them have a very busy jobs and have to confronted various pressures. To be more specific , most of them would suffered the pressure from career competition and desire to success in their works .Thus they do not have much time to have dating or get marry . Some parts of them perhap more perfer in chasing freedom , who do not like live in restrction .
Not surpringly , there are a variety of things waiting the young people to complete . But actually , havingchildren late in life are more harm than help for not only themselves but also on society . In individual , young people who having babies earlier better than they are older , in which young people have the condition of time and energry can affort the situation that babies always bother and plague their parents . Another for society , having babies late could cause an aging society ,that the city would lack of competitiveness , as a results , lower the productivty of the city .
In conclusion , people having babies later probably nice living situation and more free in persent , but this action are not for long term and somewhat harm for themselves when they are geting old ,besides , lower down the city interests.
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The bar gragh shows the relation between the number of hours spent on televison in each day and science test scores by Grade 8 students .
From the data , we recognize that there were significant relation about leisure time and test scores . First we can see the group of students did not watch television average estimatedly got 76 points in the science test and the following group was the highest scores group at 80 points , in which was spent least time about less than one hours time to watch television . Not surprisingly the scores of spent two hours to watching television group was slightly lower than before , got about 78 points . Significantly , students who spent on three hours got a same scores as students who did not watch television . In the following groups , four hours , five hours and more than 6 hours respectively estimatedly got 74 points , 71 points and 65 points .
Overall , the students who watch one hours television got the toppest scores than any others and students spent more time on television got a lower scores except who did not watch it .
12 marca 2013
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Thank you in advance againn,this is a another report , i think it maybe slightly better than before.
The line gragh shows the birds population in Europe , measured in million , in the years between 1977 and 2001 .
As we can see , the gragh of birds population shows a fluctuated downward trend . In 1977 , it was about 120 million birds in Europe but in after three years it reached a peak of appximately 125 million . However , population was sharply decreased to about 98 million in 1986 , which 27 million lower than 6 years earlier . In 1989 , it was slightly rose back to 105 million and then droped to around 95 million in 1992 that 3 million lower than in 1986 . In the following years , population had increased a litter to 96 million in 1995 , besides , it was gradually decreased until 2001 , about 90 million birds , there was the lowest number of birds exist in Europe over this 24 years.
To sum up , birds population was peak of 125 million in 1980 and lowest was 90 million in 2001 , obviously , this was a downward trend of birds population .
11 marca 2013
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Thank you in advance , I need your help to correct my essay again . Please help me.
Topic : There is no longer neccesary to have animal as food or animal product such as clothing and medicine do you agree and disagree.
Killing animals for food or animal product seem a normal bahavior of human for long time , and these sometimes overweighted our original demand results in various species dying out , on which broke the balance between people and animal . There is a cautiously suggested that people should have the right protect the variety of species.
Human are cruel and greed that most of extincted or extincting species somewhat caused by them , and some animals have strongly suffered by human . For example, in each year , a great number of fish are confronted various threat , to be more specific , some part of them hunt for hunman diet as sushi , anothers for medicine and so forth . They perhap only have a option is dead . Moreover , there are a wider range of others species have the same fate as fish .
On the other hand , there are some negative effect behind the decreasing number of species . First of all , a number of species decreased meanwhile the number of relevent species drop also . This is sound like a butterfly-effect that food demand would change if one kind of food are lack .Another event worth to concern is , the gradually growing population in world with a terrible management of food and animal protection , human has few kind of food to eat and enviornment become oddly cause they are lack of animals effect and unbalance ecosystem .
In conclusion , human not only harm for animals , but also on themselves , hance , people should protect animals for in case .
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Question:
Full-time university students need to spend a lot of time studying, but it is essential to involve other activities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays,a great number of people studying in college and they spent majority of them time to studying on courses,specially students in famou college,which require a higher offer standard is hard to enroll in.Some people cautously suggested that a good student not only should learn well,but also have various activities lifes.
There is a sound of disagree,whether students in a general college or a famous should only focus on their acadamic studying,because college is a great platform contains a varieties of knowledge,besides four years studying time is very limit compare with a people whole life span,thus students should better utilize these time to learning well and contribute for society in the future.
However,if a college student did not have any other activities, then he or she probably have only one ability is studying.There are a range of knowledge and information should learned by students,besides,a great number of them provided in enormous fields not just from books.For example,first of all,experience is very important for students and it never can be learned from a book.Students should could gain many experience throught participant various activities such as playing game,dating with others,social events and so forth.Another things cannot learned from books is emotional intelligence which really crucial for students as well.When students suffer from cruel society and vacational enviorment,may be could gain a few,which mean emotional intelligence cost so much time to accumulated.
In conclusion,students who have a great quality,are not a studying machine,however should be a combination of ability to learning well and favor to have various activities.
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The line gragh shows difference of the number of oil price per barrel in US dollars in the period of years 1995 to 2015.
As we can see ,there is a relatively rising trend in the gragh except in about the period between 1995 to 2000, on which first rose from $20 to about $25 at 1995 to 1998 and then drop back to about $17 at 2000,in which it was the bottle of gragh in 2000.Afterthen,the following by a slightly increased to around $50 at 2006. However,after the years of 2006,the oil prices had a fastest speed rose up to $120 per barrel in 2010,which more $100 much than the beginning year did.Furthermore,the oil prices had steady increased and expected to be continuitely increase to $130 at 2015.
To sum up,the oil prices of the year of 2000 was in bottle,about barely $17 per barrel.After that the oil prices was dramaticly increased in the following years ,even though the trend expected to be continuite.
10 marca 2013
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