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Writing task.
Question: "Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic ans pollution problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you think might be effective?"
Ou society definitily needs to fin a sollution for the transportation issues. In fact, I had never thought in more expensive petrol as a way to achieve this. I think it actually could help but wouldn't solve the problem. Because it wouldn't change the way the population thinks and wouldn't offer other possibilities to them.
I believe that the first step to change traffic an pollution situations is to help everybody to understand why it is important. People have to know that we can't live this way anymore.Unless we change, the planet is not going to last for so much time.Other cultural problem that we need to solve it is the idea that everybody have to get their own car. In some cases, people buy a car not because they need but just to have the social status they want. That is, we have to stop buying cars just to show that we can.
In the other hand, the government has to do his part which is to offer good public transportation. A lot of people don't use the bus or the subway because they aren't good. In fact, just a few cities in Brazil have subway or urban train and, in the most small cities there is no public transportation at all. The bus, which is used in medium and big cities is often old, expensive and late. In addition, it has it has to share space with the cars what doesn't help the traffic and they're also very polluent.
It is also essencial to find new energy sources. So, increase petrol's price could help, but it's fundamental to get free os fossil fuels, develope good public transportation, and, specially, change our minds and take care of our planet.
*** This is an exercise for an exam. I've already found a lot of mistakes, but I would like to have more feedback to know exactly what I have to improve.
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Exercise Writing Task 1
We can see in the diagrams how the cement is produced and how the concrete ir made based on the cement. Firstly, the limestone and the clay are crushed ina specific machine, than the resultant powder is mixed. In the next stage, the mixture goes to a rotating heater and after that to a grinder where the process is finished: the cement is finally ready. Than, the product is packed and goes to the stories. When the cement arrives at the building, it is time to produce concrete.
In a concrete mixer, all the ingredients are mixed. The first one is the cement, produced as we said before, in a porcentage of 15% of the mixture. Than we put 10% of water, 25% of sand and 50% of gravel which is a type of small stones. When all the features have already been mixed, the concrete is ready to be used in the building process.
*** This is an exercise for an exam. I should describe two diagrams. One of them shows cement-making process and the other how cement is used to produce concrete.
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Les plages au le Nordeste sont magnifique. La fôret Amazonica au le Norte est fantastique. Et le Rio de Janeiro est la ville marvelous.
Chaque regións est espécial.
J'aime mon pays!
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Introducing myself
Hi everybody!
It's my first day on italki. One of my friends told me about it and I liked it.
So, I'm here because I want to improve my English and I want to learn French too [and maybe another languages]
I'm from Brazil and I can help anyone who wants to learn Portuguese.
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