could anyone help me fix my grammatical errors? -Regardless of educational background and one's personality, society treats men and women differently. -It is an admitted fact that most social systems give men privilege. -As an effort to minimize social discrimination toward women, people enacted the new employment act that permits equal opportunities upon the workplace. -Recent research showed that discriminative treatment in workplace has diminished 34%. -But just because the percentage decreased, it doesn't mean that sexual discrimination is totally disappeared.

Could anyone check my sentence please? I wrote a sentence about my homework, but I don't know if it sounds natural to natives or not. Help me, please... Whereas the mass media glorify sex, parents urge restraint. By doing so, adults give children perplexing signals regarding sexuality, and thus the children feel confused.

Help me to this question about English grammar I'll firstly write the sentence that I have a problem with... Advanced technology has contributed to unhealthy levels of stress and created weapons capable of destroying in a flash everything that human beings have managed to achieve throughout history. So in this sentence, I learned that I can't use relative pronoun "which" after everthing, but why is that??? why i can only put "that" instead of ''which"????? Could someone explain this to me clearly??

Could someone correct my grammatical mistakes or unnatural sentences? I've been praticing essay writing and I wrote some sentences but i don't know if they seem natural or gramatically correct to put in an essay or not.... so plz help me out!! 1. Human beings are innate inventors and innovators 2. We have been trying endlessly toward higher satisfactions in our lives. 3. In this moment, we should carefully consider about benefits of the developement and the shortcomings that come along with it. 4. Cellphone is a terrific example which this generation is proposing. 5. We cannot refute about benefits of cellphone but there is always price for these. 6. Many people are experiencing uncomfortable mind everyday feeling bound by the cellphones. 7. Moreover, the danger of talking through cellphone while driving is a well-known fact. 8. If we cannot deal with the bad sides of progress, we might become slaves of the technology which we developed in order to improve our livings. i wrote these and even though they are grammatically correct but they still seem really weird or unmatched or unnatural...:( so could anyone fix these sentences using more academic level of words and structure??