Please check my email... I would appreciate your comments and corrections 3. Please describe your previous leadership experience. My latest leadership experience was in military service. I was serviced as infantry in GOP, which is the closest place with North Korea. It was a dangerous place, because we usually kept a loaded gun with real bullets and stayed in DMZ(Demilitarized zone). In the tough and difficult circumstances, I got a mission to take charge of 7 subordinates as the leader of my squad. I couldn't help accepting the position even though I really wanted to avoid it in my heart. But, consequently, I safely completed my mission without any accidents during that period of time.

Please check my email... I would appreciate your corrections(It is kind of importance for me) Dear Jennifer I wrote an email to you for having a few questions. Is it possible that I can "re-apply" for CCS entrance to get more scholarship, 48,000$? ( I got 36,000$ as entrance scholarship last year) As you know, I put off a semester last year to get well-prepared on CCS. These days I have been developing and refining my portfolio with teaching students Engish. If this suggestion is accepted, then It would encourage me to work much harder to make a better portfolio for the rest of the days and It also helps my financial problem. ( I guess this upcoming semester deadline would be at the beginning of June) Im looking forward to seeing ur reply. Thank you :) Faithfully yours, Changbo, Koo

Please check my email... I would appreciate your comments and corrections 4. What experience do you have working with children ages 7-17? First, I was a English tutor at the private English library in my down-town for about three months. What I did at there was to teach and help children(7~15 In Korea age) to read recommended English books from American schools such as "Ronald Dahl series" , "Harry Potter series" and so on. Second, I was a English teacher at the small English institute for about 6 months. I taught students(ages 12~16) about reading, vocabulary and grammar.

Please check my email... I would appreciate your comments and corrections 1.How did you hear about Bodwell's Global Leadership Training Program? I heard about Bodwell's Global Leadership Training Program from "Lin Kim" who volunteered to take care of young kids at the same church. He recommended me that this would be such a great time for you and your future resume. So, I eventually decided to apply for this program.

Please check my email... I would appreciate your comments and corrections I am writing to inform you that I had received a message sent with tracking number "1600272855', TNT delivery service from you. However, It has turned out that it has been still the wrong number for 3 days. As I had known by myself, TNT delivery service originally has a 9-digit sequence of numbers while the numbe you sent has a 10-digit sequence of numbers. Let me know whether you haven't sent it yet with a tracking number or you sent a wrong number. Please message me as soon as possible

Please correct my short writing.. I need your corrections and comments :) I get an incurable disease diagnosed as CRPS. There is no any CRPS treatment existing in the world. Although there are some kind of surgical procedure that relieves the pain from CRPS. Of course, It is just a temporary expediment and only fits for few people. One of the most powerful thing is "SMILING" for us who have been living for today rather than tomorrow. Let's earnestly encourage and support the fact that treatment will be discovered soon by enduring each other. I would like to say the word "Expectation", "Hope" and "Perservance" to CRPS patients as well as other sick people in the world.

Correct my one simple sentence please :) This is the one of my favorite song for sweetful lyrics and sorrowful melady.

Would you please make only one sentence properly Please??? Limited corporation (A) made contract with limited corporation (B) for the friendly match with OO on 12 August 2014. For this, it is confirmed that all rights are reserved by Limited coporation (B)

It is kind of a short business letter, Please correct it thank you ;) It is honored for us to make contact with your company . In order to meet the domestic demands, our company is looking for a firm which is manufacturing this product in China. If your company is carrying such product then, please provide us with cheap prices of the product. Thank you.