Someone can correct my last entry "Do you like shop?"? Please I need help with my last entry, called "Do you like shop?", you can see it in my profile!!!!! Thank you all!

Do you like to shop? What I like the most about go shopping is to shop clothes. I really love to have new clothes and accessories and I wish to have enough money to wear always the latest fashion. My favorite way to shop is in shopping centres although this sometimes could be a little axhausting because you often walk a lot to find what suits you and comparing prices, Some other times you thing there are so much shops to choose, so you feel overwhelmed and finally don't find anything. I think shopping online must be easier in that point and you can save time but it is not possible to try on the clothes before pay it, to see if it fits you or not. Besides I am quite impatient and I'm not able to wait the order, that's why I will continuous buying in a traditional shop.

Comparing shopping alone to shopping with friends Depending on what are our interests when we go shopping, we should consider if it is better to go shopping with friends or alone. That's why, when we go out with friends, we usually buy thing on impulse because we are not quite concentrated and we get carried away by what our friends say. That's not happen when we are alone and it takes less time because you just go for an specific article. Anyway go shopping with friends is always more amusing for the most of people and could be a good way to spend time with friends.

Youtubers One of the things has helped me better to improve my English is to watch Youtube channels. There are people really brilliant and I can spend a lot of time watching them because they makes me fun or I learn new stuff. This people are called "Youtubers" and one of my favorites is NigaHiga, I don't remember how I find it out but I really recommend it, whether if you are learning english or not. He is known for his comedy videos and has over 15 million suscribers!!!!!! It doesn't surprised me at all, he is a really good! Here I copy a link! Have a look and tell me! [embed]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AJVpL6L7Zeo[/embed]

Overwhelmed Here I am, trying to improve my English although I don’t know how to start… I want to improve my writing and speaking skills! I notice that it is easy to me to understand the language when I heard it or read it, but when I have to express myself… I feel overwhelmed. The ideas doesn’t come to me, my mind goes blank, and I know I have enough English level for speak about anything. So, I decided to write, at least, an entry here to get better and better and beat this obstacle. There are only two options: make progress or make excuses. No more excuses. :) I'm gonna write here as well -> https://demelzadd.wordpress.com/ In case someone wants to have a look! Thx

How can I say this experience in my curriculum vitae or resume? Sales promoter or sales demonstrator, What is the proper way?

Can someone correct this Erasmus Motivation Letter? Dear Sir/Madam, I am currently in my last year of studies at the Primero de Mayo College of Dental Hygiene (Gran Canaria, Spain) and currently performing an Erasmus stay in Lahti, Finland. I will graduate in December 2015 by the Primero de Mayo Collegue, plus having the Title Dental Hygienist. For the time, I will already have experience as Dental Hygienist in a Dental Clinic here from September until December 2015. I am interested in having a 2 or 3 months winter internship in your company by the Erasmus Placement grant of our college and in case of getting this grant, I will be able to supply and afford for all my needs (accommodation, travel, etc…) during the internship period. Accepting me as an intern will not bring any financial responsibility to your company. Finland was the obvious choice for me. It is a country with amazing history, geography and culture. I would like acquaint with local traditions and people, because people in Finland are warm, talkitive and hospitable. But mainly I would familiarize how high level of education in country like Finland is. And that is why I chose for student city Lahti. My strengths are: I am punctual, disciplined and a very organized person, who is not afraid of new challenges or new tasks. Also, I am responsible, precise and hard-working and have good comunication skills. For that I do believe I would be particularly suitable for the position as Dental Hygenist. My mother tongue is Spanish, I speak fluent English and basic French. I have good computer knowledge. In addition, I believe this internship would provide me with the ideal opportunity to expand my professional skills. As an intern, I would like to contribute your company’s workflow and to learn as much as I can. My Curriculum Vitae, enclosed here with for your consideration, includes additional information on my experience and skills. I hope you will take this letter as a sincere proof of my interest and motivation to have an internship in your company. I am very much looking forward to meeting you and If you need any additional information, please do not hesitate in contacting me by email [email protected]. I appreciate your time and consideration, I will available for work in January 2016 and hope to hear from you as soon as posible because I need to take a decision as to what I shall be doing during the winter. Sincerely yours, Demelza Diepa Díaz *(Please, correct my mistakes. Would you change something?)

Do you study dental hygiene or know someone who is a dental hygienist? The last months I've been studying this profession that I really love! Here you get the certificate after 2 years of study and practices, there's only left me a year to finish it. We are more that dental assistants, you have quite resposabilities and I a think is a really beautiful job!!! Do you like this profession as well? Would you like to be a dentist in the future? How much time did you take to get the certificate in your country? It's true that in England the dental hygenist can apply local anaesthetic? Tell all you want!!! and please, can someone correct my mistakes? Thank you all!!

Hi everyone! Hi! My name's Demelza. I need to practice and improve my english writting. I would like to find someone who rewrite what a I write first, because I don't want you only correct my mistakes I'd like to know how write and sounds good. I'd like to sound like a native speaker!!! Thank you so much!!