Does anyone could help me check if this article is grammatically right? Many Thanks!! I know the content of below article may be professional, just help me to correct the grammatical mistakes, THANKS. Wave 2 Training (9/15-9/19) was finished smoothly in WUHAN city. There were 78 employees of PITA China attended this training, of these 20 were from AWEF, including 10 GBs and 10 BBs. The training aims at improving the ability of trainee to solve the questions in a professional way, thus one will play an important role in the project he is involved in. To the trainees, the knowledge they were required to master in 5 days is too much. That including, 15 Principles, 8 Wastes, 17 Core Processes, VST, VOC, etc. for the test, one got the 80% score was needed. All these put great pressure on the trainees, and 90% from we AWEF colleagues passed the exam at last. But in the other hand, the trainees learned new knowledge, they can analyze and solve questions from many aspects and make new friends. That will have a positive impact on their future job. In the end, thanks for the teachers: Jim, David.

Could anyone help me check the grammar? THANKS. Please modify the article as many as you can.thanks. “Process Quality Competition” of our company had finished smoothly on Sep 12. Through the competition, not only to recognize the excellent projects in our company, but to choose the best of the best to join the higher level project competition. There were in total 11 projects attended this year. At first, the project leader made a introduction of his project and showed the improvements through the PPT, then the judges submitted the questions, after he or she got the answer from the project leader, he or she provided each score of 7 standards. Finally, according to the scores of the judges and the quality status of the project, the project got its ranking. All the projects were highly appreciated by the judges and at last 4 projects won. The competition was good for all the participants. For the project leaders, they learned from each other; for the most judges, they found ways to their issues. In the end, all the participants raised questions and exchanged ideas. That’s must be good for our company. All the judges and projects list as follows: Above is the article written to contribute to newspaper of our company. I feel the words are too simple and isn't like business English. Could you help me? Thanks.

Could anyone help me check if the article is grammatically correct? Many thanks. “Process Quality Competition” has finished smoothly on Sep 12. Through the competition, not only to recognize the excellent projects in our company, but to choose the best of the best to join the higher level project competition. There were in total 11 projects attended this year. At first, the project leader made a introduction of his project and showed the improvements in PQ through the PPT, then the judges submitted the questions, after he or she getting the answer from the project leader, he or she provided each score of the 7 standards: Definition of Project, Data Collection & Measurement, Facts and Data Analysis, Process/Product Improvement Plan, Implementation/Deployment Plan, Benefits/Results Attained and Controlling/Sustaining Benefits. Finally, according to the scores of the judges and the process quality status of the project, the project got its ranking. All the projects were highly appreciated by the judges and at last the 4 projects won: VST Project, Valves Quality Improvement, Quality Improvement, and Capacity Improvement. The competition was good for all the participants. For the project leaders, they learned from each other; for the most judges, they found ways to their issues. At the end, all the participants raised questions and exchanged ideas. That’s must be good for our company. All the judges and projects list as follows:

Could you help me to edit my article? Could you help me to edit my article? “Process Quality” has finished smoothly on Sep 12. Through the competition, not only to recognize the excellent projects in our company, but to choose the best of the best to join the higher level project competition. There were in total 11 projects attended this year. At first, the project leader made a introduction of his project and showed the improvements in PQ through the PPT, then the judges submitted the questions, after he or she getting the answer from the project leader, he or she provided each score of the 7 standards: Definition of Project, Data Collection & Measurement, Facts and Data Analysis, Process/Product Improvement Plan, Implementation/Deployment Plan, Benefits/Results Attained and Controlling/Sustaining Benefits. Finally, according to the scores of the judges and the process quality status of the project, the project got its ranking. All the projects were highly appreciated by the judges and at last the 4 projects won: VST Project, Valves Quality Improvement, Quality Improvement, and Capacity Improvement. The competition was good for all the participants. For the project leaders, they learned from each other; for the most judges, they found ways to their issues. At the end, all the participants raised questions and exchanged ideas. That’s must be good for our company. All the judges and projects list as follows: