Can you help me correct my composition?---My Dream When I was a little kid, I always dreamed of becoming a diplomat someday. After I learned English----the international language, this desire is even stronger, I became fascinated about the International and multicultural environment. Since then, working or studying in such an environment has become my invariable pursue, that is also the reason why I chose to study International Economic Law during my graduate study. Through my love for the International environment and my efforts in learning English, I got a 6.5 point result in the IELTS exam. As a matter of fact, this score is enough for me to apply for a foreign University and go on studying. However, I have to give up my ambition of studying abroad temporarily because of the high tuition. Fortunately, your information gives me the hope, and draw me nearer to my dream. I always hope to work in the environment where I can meet people from all over the world, which would bring me an international perspective. You give me the chance to make it come true. In addition, although I have studied the basic knowledge about European Commission in the University, I want to learn more about its operation process as well as the internal workings of the European institutions, and put what I have learned into practice. In the end, I hope that I can lay a foundation for my future career from this opportunity. You opened a window for my life, and made me know my dream is not as far-fetched as I thought before. In terms of the qualification, my aspiration to integrate into the international environment gives me the willingness to learn more about the European Commission's working methods. And it will be possible that as a non EU citizen from China, my unique perspective could give you some suggestions and make a bit of contribution to your daily work. As I have mentioned before, this working environment is the one I like best, it will definitely stir up me to the enthusiasm of the work. I believe it will be an important experience in my whole life!