Please help me to correct my essay ,thank you so much . As the development of the society ，the diversity between countries are becoming more and more small. That is to say , countries becoming more and more similar to cater for this globalized trend .In my opinion ,though it has some advantages in some aspects , the disadvantages in this situation outweigh its advantages . Indeed ,I have to say that this "similar" trend has some advantages on the surface,such as the economy field.It can provide convenience for people. For they can buy the same products just in their own countries or cities instead of travelling to other area. Thus , people could not only save their money but also avoid time waste . In addition , goverments may get benefits from this way too .In a globalization background , the internatinal communication between countries become more easy and realizable. However , inspite of some limited benefits I mentioned above ,the disadvantages would be obvious .For instance , in terms of protecting the culture diversity, the "similar "trend will go against this idea. This means that countries might lose characters and people have no sense of judgment even more it is an obstacle to people's creativities and innovations. For example, in such a context , the world's leading Fashion industry would like to indicate people from all around the world what would be the most popular wearing in current , what kind of clothing should people wear would be considered as as stylish look. Thus , you can often see people wearing the same pattern coat in the street. So here's the problem: How could we talk about "beauty" or "taste " without diference or character . ? Overall ， I think that different should be kept between counries in a certain extent rather than becoming more and more similar.

A Riddles Game This was a cultural activity which I organized the community’s women to participated during the period when I worked in a community . In China most women in this age mainly belongs to the private sphere of family, plays wives, mothers and nurturers social roles. There ’s fewer opportunity for them to participate in social cultural activities .Meanwhile ,they also lack of consciousness of social participation . In China, riddles are metaphorical poetic language arts with its specific Chinese language structure and expression.It is a special literary genre that is used to test and develop people's intelligence with exquisite language. To inspire people for the metaphor of cognition is the ultimate expression of its aesthetic . This cognition is mainly reflected in the use of metaphor. The essence of the riddles is to form a concept by the characteristics of things or things that has been informed while the concept has a close relate to other things .That is to say the process of riddle solving is actually a process to form a new concept . Aesthetic euphoria results from the riddle comprehending. Psychological tension is replaced by the relaxation and comfort by solving the riddles.The discover of the answer means that the the subjective forces of freedom conquered the riddles’s limits. I would like to let people to feel their body initiative by inspire thought through the language game. The riddle texts were written on color papers ,Those who knew the answer can write it down the paper with their name ,and who with the highest score would be the winner.

language learning Nowadays more and more parents hope their children could learn a foreign language ,which would be a very helpful skills in their future lives .Obviously ,the earlier a child learn a foreign language the more benefits he /she would get . Maybe there are some people consist that it would be better to let a children began to study a new language when they became older ,or when they went to secondary school ,for the period that they could have a better comprehension and learning ability ,although their concerns need to be acknowledged or understood ,I think they are perhaps oversimplifying the situation here .It has been showed by research that to master a foreign language the best time to study is during primary school ,or even before the school age . As a tool for communication ,the purpose for people to use a language is to communicate with others in daily life,while the foreign language teaching curriculum at primary school is tend to experience the linguistic ambience by getting close to daily expression and creating students interests to study rather than focus on examinations which is the secondary schools more likely to do .Therefore ,that would be a good way to inspire children 's interests to learn a foreign language . While when I was learning English I always be told by an excellent teacher that the best way would learn a language is to make yourself as a baby ,because babies are the best imitators. For instance ,each native speakers could speak their mother tongue very well , also because they began to study language when they were babies .

The Most Effective Media As the media technology has developed dramatically in recent years,more kinds of media for communicating information have been applied by humanbeing . Here I will give three types ——Books,Television and Film and to analysing how different role do they act in the morden media. Books, together with magazines,jounals,newspapers etc, usually considered as the most oldest way to transfer information ,now,despite the paper-made ,we also have electronic books(E—books) ,people get information via a particular equipment in this way. Film, more likely seemed as an artistic media,often used to tell an fictional story or express a sense of spirit,it's a kind of entertainment,which is not daily ,essential necessities in people's life. Besides the former two , is television.it‘'s the production with the development of times.Nowadays ,each family has a TV set. People always would like to open the TV set when they got home, from the television ,they can get all kinds of information in an immediately, speedly, and expediently way which the fuction of books and films can not have simultaneously .

Move out to the large cities As the global economy has developed considerably in recent years ,in some countries , the administration encourages industries and businesses to move out of large cities and into regional areas or villages and towns,inorder to fulfill the new needs of modern economies . There are some reasons for the governments to do so. As more and more industries and business centres are built in the large cities ,it has becoming a saturation state .It thus causes a series of environment pollution problems ,and has lowered people's living qualities. While move out of large cities can solve these problems in some extent.In addition to this ,it can also promote regional cooperation and improve the economy of regional areas by providing employment opportunity. At the same time ,some disadvantages in some aspects may also exist.For example ,a widely move out may also cause the same problems as in the large cities do .Hence the people who live in the regional areas will against the governments ' policies. But since it has become a realistic requirement of the development of the modern economy,the remove of the industries 'advantages still outweight its disadvantages .

An aid to poor countries Though the global economy developed sharply in recent years ,there still have a number of poor countries in the world. How to help these countries to get rid of proverty? It seems exist two voices :some people think that there are many negative effects to give aid to poor countries while the dissenters believe that it is necessary to give them an assistance. In many ways ,the reasons for people who oppose to aid the poor countries probably because these points below: first it may result in those poor countries losing their own creativities and the capacity of the economic independent .Second,sometimes the donor countries do not know very well about what the developing countries real needs ,so a blind investment won't work.Finally it may cause some political problems . In contrast,the support believe that the developed countries should give aid to the poor due to it unstable politics ,they have no capacity to recover their economy,if we ignored ,then there will be an imbalance development in the world . Overall,personally ,I probably agree with the standpoint which is we should give the poorer countries an aid through the measures of economic investiment , by making advantaged policies ,and the most impotant is to combine with the real issues avoid blind conducts.

Travel in Tokyo Last month, I took a journey to Tokyo for five days.It was short but memorable. To Chinese people who born in 80s, everyone watched a lot of Japanese Automations, TV shows, and movies during the childhood and the puberty , which structured all the beautiful imaginations of Japan. Now I 'm going to be right on the scene and I 'm so excited! During the five days ,I visited three scenic spots and went shopping! What impressived me was the strong sense of reponsibility and the high spirits respecting work of Japanese.All the service workers always smiling ,genty,and polite.If you asked for the derection,people always would like to help you and even brought you to the destination.Besides,it ‘s also worth praising the Japanese garbage sorting and the smoking policy,everyone makes themselves an example to create a comfortable living environment .I think all are based on its good education . China deserves to learn from Japan. There are too many views deserve to see in Japan,espacially the delicious healthy food! In summarize , my vision of tokyo is clean , orderly,polite, friendly,maybe a little bit self-control. I expect to go there again!

About numbers Always confuse these words , like billion,million,trillion.etc. How to say: 253, 2530 , 25300, 253000, 2530000, 25300000

what's the difference between "do not "and "don't" In what situation people should say :"do not"and in what situation people should say "don't"?Why we couldn't always write :don't?