Can anyone correct this letter? (This is my life story-1) I already sent it anyway, but I want to know the correct one ------------------- Hello Pa___ I’m writing this letter at Dubai airport, on my way back home. I went to the UK (England) with my friends last week for holiday. I had a great time there. It was my first long hours flight and travel abroad by myself since I got hurt from the accident. At first I was a little bit worried because of my history of illness, but it was not a problem at all. YAY! :) You’ve ask about the accident. At very first my doctors who were looking after me, they didn’t even know why I had fallen from 4th floor of the building where I have lived. I also didn’t know why... and even realised the fact that I had fallen and hurt a lot until I saw my wound with my own eyes. That’s because I’ve fainted when the accident happened... (2010.11.02.). So that no one could tell what happens at that time, however, with the building CCTV(closed-circuit television) and via some medical test, thay(doctors) figured out it was my brain thing. It was a Cerebral Aneurysm or something similar. One of the blood vessel in my head was swollen and because of that, I had a spasm and fainted, also unluckily fallen out of the building. The CCTV showed that I stagger out of my room and walked along the hallway. At the end of the hallway, there was fire escape stairs and I had fallen from there. At that time my doctor said I was very lucky that I didn’t have a cerebral haemorrhage. He also told me that the spasm I had was kind of early signs/symptoms of a cerebral haemorrhage, and many young people like 20-30, they don’t know until a brain haemorrhage because they’re young and healthy. Anyway, at that time, during 2 weeks from the accident I was an intensive care room and I didn’t realised what happened yo me. It took 2 weeks which I really accept that the facts my both legs are broken and I was cannot walk for a long time. I had to undergo major surgery. Like I told you before, In the hospital, I was very depressed because I was young but couldn’t walked. At that time it was unsure that I can walk again. Every night I wished and prayed that all situation is just bad dream and if not, I thought, it would be better that I don’t even wake up at all. But my parents.. Even though they surely had a very difficult time deeply but they never showed me and always told me that “we’re happy just because you’re alive here and that’s all that matters.”